He called out for anyone...

I answered so we could make this a 3 parter...

Thrilla in Manilla RB style...

Check in, my man.

Good luck.

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Word.. Good luck

No beef.. Let's make this dope.
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The Creation

Calls himself Sexee Textcee...why...most of us are male...
I guess he's tryin ta attract hard thugs...like Chrit did in jail.*
So far we're 1-1 in battle, deadlocked like a jury on the hang...
And I'd say, "Fuck you, Token"...
But then he'd try and bring the New Year in with a bang.
And if that weren't bad enough, his rhymes are weak and don't hit...
It's cuz Santa brought him skill for Christmas...
But it came from the Island of Misfits. (Rudolph cartoon)
Dipshit! You stink, no chance here, but if...
You somehow managed ta drop hot shit, peeps still wouldn't want a whiff.
Accept your loss, it's coming, as sure as you'll be alone tonight, man...
Cuz Token might ring in the New Year, but he's doing it with his left hand.


*Sorry, Chrit, couldn't resist...

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lol damn man.. Didn't know we doin this so quick.. Nice verse.. I'll drop sometime by tonight.
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No freeposting.. This is warning..-Token

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Florida.. Representing.

Fucka structure.. I'll take it to the level of Abercrombie and Fitch..
..Fade out your genes, put holes in ya pants and declare your ass ripped
Lines are shittier than ass, and i'll put you at the end of your seat
You're just a fruit.. Oh sorry.. I mistakened this veggie.. Your beet
Your hot verse'll burn out quick.. Like this match was set in the wind
Cuz when it comes down to it, You succeeding is like de-modding The End
Everyones against it.. Just like we all despize how you act like a vet
With all the props B2K pretends he gets..
This kid must be in some real serious credit debt
I'll have to re name this battle Brandon, Because this is The End
Now i've cost you a loss of credit..
Leaving you With no money to spend

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WTF....i posted some long ass explanation and get some error page fuck dat!
token wins.........harder punches better personals.....everything else...flow...metas.....dissing.....structure....v ocab...everything pretty much even...close battle token wins for better punches

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Born 2 Kill

Calls himself Sexee Textcee...why...most of us are male...
I guess he's tryin ta attract hard thugs...like Chrit did in jail.*

Dope...Good play from his Custom Title

So far we're 1-1 in battle, deadlocked like a jury on the hang...
And I'd say, "Fuck you, Token"...
But then he'd try and bring the New Year in with a bang.

Hmmm...Ok punchline.. not great


And if that weren't bad enough, his rhymes are weak and don't hit...
It's cuz Santa brought him skill for Christmas...
But it came from the Island of Misfits. (Rudolph cartoon)

Lol....straight punch


Dipshit! You stink, no chance here, but if...
You somehow managed ta drop hot shit, peeps still wouldn't want a whiff.

Dope..Lol...


Accept your loss, it's coming, as sure as you'll be alone tonight, man...
Cuz Token might ring in the New Year, but he's doing it with his left hand.

Kinda weak....
Born 2 Kill ya verse was pretty dope
Good punches, structure a lil off...
Closer was a lil weak...unless i didn't understand it right
But overall i'd give ya verse 16/20




Token

Fucka structure.. I'll take it to the level of Abercrombie and Fitch..
..Fade out your genes, put holes in ya pants and declare your ass ripped

Dope wordplay...good punch

Lines are shittier than ass, and i'll put you at the end of your seat
You're just a fruit.. Oh sorry.. I mistakened this veggie.. Your beet

Nice punch...wordplay also good


Your hot verse'll burn out quick.. Like this match was set in the wind
Cuz when it comes down to it, You succeeding is like de-modding The End

hmm...shouldn't it be de-admining The End??


Everyones against it.. Just like we all despize how you act like a vet
With all the props B2K pretends he gets..
This kid must be in some real serious credit debt

Flow a lil off...but straight punch


I'll have to re name this battle Brandon, Because this is The End
Now i've cost you a loss of credit..
Leaving you With no money to spend

Dope wordplay...Punch hit pretty hard...
Token ya verse was pretty good....
You was pretty consistant with wordplay and punches
Overall i'd give you 17/20


This battle was pretty dope..
But Token edged it... he was consistant with wordplay and punches
Born 2 Kill consintrated mostly on punches
He had a lil bit of a personal...but it was pretty played

Vote-Token

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B2K.. Wanna move this to Elevated?
Just say the word and I'll do it.

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Calls himself Sexee Textcee...why...most of us are male...
I guess he's tryin ta attract hard thugs...like Chrit did in jail.*
9/10
So far we're 1-1 in battle, deadlocked like a jury on the hang...
And I'd say, "Fuck you, Token"...
But then he'd try and bring the New Year in with a bang.
6/10

And if that weren't bad enough, his rhymes are weak and don't hit...
It's cuz Santa brought him skill for Christmas...
But it came from the Island of Misfits. (Rudolph cartoon)
7/10
Dipshit! You stink, no chance here, but if...
You somehow managed ta drop hot shit, peeps still wouldn't want a whiff.
7/10
Accept your loss, it's coming, as sure as you'll be alone tonight, man...
Cuz Token might ring in the New Year, but he's doing it with his left hand.
7/10

38/50=Good

Fucka structure.. I'll take it to the level of Abercrombie and Fitch..
..Fade out your genes, put holes in ya pants and declare your ass ripped
9/10 ha i liked
Lines are shittier than ass, and i'll put you at the end of your seat
You're just a fruit.. Oh sorry.. I mistakened this veggie.. Your beet
8/10
Your hot verse'll burn out quick.. Like this match was set in the wind
Cuz when it comes down to it, You succeeding is like de-modding The End
6/10 blah poor line.
Everyones against it.. Just like we all despize how you act like a vet
With all the props B2K pretends he gets..
This kid must be in some real serious credit debt
8/10
I'll have to re name this battle Brandon, Because this is The End
Now i've cost you a loss of credit..
Leaving you With no money to spend
8/10

34/50

close 1 & token just got this not because he had more punches that were better but he had better wordplay for example the beat line

Whoo whooo

Born to kill..nice but didnt feel it lacked hard punches..

Vote - Token wins due wordplay & punches..
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woups add them up youself
B2k= 36/50
token
37/50 add it up yourself it was a mistake blahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Yo this battle was tight cuz, but Token took this, he had better wordplay, his punches hit stronger, and had better personals, Born To Kill ripped it nicely though, but I don't thin he came strong enough to win... Good shit ya's

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