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good luck.

The rhymes Im spittin at ya R, have ya confused n dazed
Have ya stuck on what to do here cuz u truly are a-mazed!
Yea Im bitchin at ya verse...so call me the K-nine-nine
Cuz im krowned better than Saap at Defendin ya lines!
takin ya pre-writtens, shovin em bak in ya face on paper
Dis here is ur Reflection bitch...A Big F for a Failure!
Maybe I should just mail ya, Send ya somewhere close
So u can return to us soon and might drop a decent post!
His verse been roast...even tho his meat was cheap
Mickey Dee's keystyle is the closest u'll ever get to beef!
Think ur cool In ya profile talkin bout likin clits
But ya say u like to spit twice...So ya must love dicks!

oh well...lets jsut get this closed...man didn't even show.............................................. .................................................. ...............................

just saw this ill drop soon im keying my verse now ill ldrop in like
15 min.

co ...so its not gettin closed then.. u down wit me droppin rite

pc

yea sure lol.................drop if ya want...............took u long enuff tho lol............................................... ............just drop ya verse...record dun matter to me anyways

Ya Verse is remotely mild,if u want To feel heat just wait..
cuz it dont matter wut kind of salsa u r..too me your just Payce.
ya punches are fake plus your a bitch.but dont get but hurt.
Cuz there aint no need for me to feed off your verse..
your teh worst mc ive seen.... u get dipped by chipz..
like nervous kids getting jack your abouta piss..
ya pants..so u mite as weel quit rappin cuz your that wak..
no need to get a 2 week notice cuz u werent,only as a fag..
so homie id bounce the rap scene cuz u werent seen at all..
u didnt have skill.ya verse will back me up of that, so stop..
cuz u aint raw.....u cudnt spit heat if u had a glock..
my spits knock..
unlike ya keystyles..wut made u think u were sick..
well u aint your a textee battler.on rb..an your 3-6
u cud only find 3 newbs. wut a shame , your rap less..
watcha get slapped bitch cuz your complete wackness.
ill quarter ass this verse to determine if ya verse will sell...
fukit ill end this quick an hand this kid his 7th L

reflektinz got this battle with better punches.,..more structured verse..more complexity..better everything..this was a weak battle though..Payce came jus a little short..if you would have stepped up your game a lil more..you prolly would have had this..aight..peace

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I agree wit Dixie totaly bolth didnt come as hard as they could. and Ref came wit better 1 2's and shit neather was very complex but Ref was dencet

aight vote Ref

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HMMMMMMMM

iddint have TIme to try i dropped that 14 bar verse in like 4 minutes

most of the time took typin it out..

uppin#################1

I think Reflektionz got this hands down
He had a good opener which was a pretty nice personal
And his puches hit alot harder and were more cleaver
I think both of you had a pretty decent flow but overall
Reflektionz took this one good battle guys.

I havent got enough posts to vote yet or I would.
But I thought you would like some feedback.

Do me a favor and vote on my battle with Street thug

i am not blind
its easy to see this shit through
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This battle was aight. Not the best verses I've seen, but I guess they'll work.

Payce, ya structure was on point, but you could have had better punches & snaps.

Reflektionz, your flow and rhymez were a lil' off, but wit' a rushed keystyle, it's understandable. You could have done a lot better on that tho.

PaYce:

The rhymes Im spittin at ya R, have ya confused n dazed
Have ya stuck on what to do here cuz u truly are a-mazed!
^No punches -filler for an opener: 4/10

Yea Im bitchin at ya verse...so call me the K-nine-nine
Cuz im krowned better than Saap at Defendin ya lines!
^ok meta: 5/10

takin ya pre-writtens, shovin em bak in ya face on paper
Dis here is ur Reflection bitch...A Big F for a Failure!
^no punches STILL: 4/10

Maybe I should just mail ya, Send ya somewhere close
So u can return to us soon and might drop a decent post!
^ok snap: 5/10

His verse been roast...even tho his meat was cheap
Mickey Dee's keystyle is the closest u'll ever get to beef!
^decent line -your best in the verse: 6/10

Think ur cool In ya profile talkin bout likin clits
But ya say u like to spit twice...So ya must love dicks!
^ok personal, but not a strong close: 5/10

Reflektionz:

Ya Verse is remotely mild,if u want To feel heat just wait..
cuz it dont matter wut kind of salsa u r..too me your just Payce.
^aight open, decent personal: 6/10

ya punches are fake plus your a bitch.but dont get but hurt.
Cuz there aint no need for me to feed off your verse..
^filler: 4/10

your teh worst mc ive seen.... u get dipped by chipz..
like nervous kids getting jack your abouta piss..
ya pants..so u mite as weel quit rappin cuz your that wak..
^ok lines, but no hard punches: 5/10

no need to get a 2 week notice cuz u werent,only as a fag..
^more filler

so homie id bounce the rap scene cuz u werent seen at all..
u didnt have skill.ya verse will back me up of that, so stop..
^decent line, umm, ehh personal: 5/10

cuz u aint raw.....u cudnt spit heat if u had a glock..
my spits knock..
unlike ya keystyles..wut made u think u were sick..
well u aint your a textee battler.on rb..an your 3-6
^ooh, nice punch, best line of tha battle: 7/10

u cud only find 3 newbs. wut a shame , your rap less..
watcha get slapped bitch cuz your complete wackness.
^decent line: 6/10

ill quarter ass this verse to determine if ya verse will sell...
fukit ill end this quick an hand this kid his 7th L
^nice close: 6/10

Payce: 48.33% ill

Reflectionz: 55.71% ill

Vote: Ref.

Both y'all, keep elevatin..........................~1~pz

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