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Agonys In Too Much Pain.. I'll Put Tha Bitch Out of His Misery
This Kids Dope And Can Flow? I've Seen Flyer Fish Than He
Get This Fag Some Morphine.. Considering Ya Name.. You Must Be Hurting
Been Watching Ag For Weeks Looking For Talent.. But Im Still Searching
I Can See Tha Eraser Marks Already.. Not Hard To Tell Agony Pre-Wrote It
Disappointed At My Oponnent.. Cuz I Didnt Just Make This Thread.. I Own It
Punch Agony So Hard.. He'll Go Through Hurt.. And Land Right Past Pain
Match Game? Mash Ya Brains On Tha Ground.. Give It A Couple Grass Stains
This Fucker Must Shit Nothing But Wet Cement.. Cuz All He Drops Is Soft
LMAO.. You Ill? I Could Be Sicker Than You.. If I Randomly Caughed

Caugh Caugh Caugh....I'm Done Now...Thanks For You're Time......lol

check it, yo yo, yo

kaos u stupid, since u agreed to challenge me
my name means pain, so I could put u in Agony
one of my puches can easily disfigure ur anatomy
u think ur hot, but in fact u really wack to me
my guns is like twister, cause they both spit rapidly
kaos, u the only dick on rb, like a boy in an all-girl academy
ur punches r weak, so ur only hope is stabbin me
but u don't know how to hold weapons, which is very sad to see
they offered a mill for dukin a guy, and u accepted happily
kaos, even if I was 100th* on the list, u'd still be a thousand spots after me

*list of top emcees

my vote goes to agony better flow,nice metas and some good personals. the battle was sub-par but agony still did what he needed to do to get the win.

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aite lets see...


Kaos

hmmm average verse, nothing special, some lines seemed out of place, or irrelivant to the battle, some good creatie idea's... okay wordplay, ya rhyme scheme was good, some nice multi's... kinda lacking in pesonals, but you had some average punches...

Agony

lyrically this was ite, some coo puches, some of it was kinda simple, average wordplay, lacked personals, but damn flow was tight, and really coo rhyme scheme, could imagine a verse like that in an audio battle, kept the same rhyme scheme right till the end, which made it sound tight, but lyrically it lacked cos of it, could of had better idea's, or more complex punches, but coo verse...


Kaos / Agony: out of 10:

Punches- 5/5
Personals- 3/3
Wordplay- 5/5
Multi's/Flow- 6/8
Creativity- 5/5

Overall:
Kaos- 24
Agony- 26


everything was really close to call other than multi's and flow which agony stood out in, and if there was a stand out line it would probably be from agony as well... so thats my vote...

you both put up a real good battle... props to both emcee's...

VOTE = AGONY



if either of you could drop a honest vote on my battle with Buzzkill... thanks...

^^^^ this kid Knows what he's talking about .....said i was lacking in personals...... thats funny... when half my lines were directed at tha word agony ..........herb

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kaos
i mean every line he said was directed at agony
little over done on the name diss but good shit
agony
it seemed his lines werent that personal but did flow better the kaos could have switched up the ryhme scheme but it did work


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kaos

could the both of you drop a vote in on my battle wit lyrical humour thx alot it would be nice..............

Honestly I don't think Agony came strong enough to take this, Kaos had better vocab, his punches hit harder, and he had more creativity. It was pretty good though, but my vote goes to Kaos, keep elevatin'

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kaos getz mah vote......
opener: tie....both of u waz a lil' weak
clozer:kaos...nicee.....
punches: kaos
personalz: kaos....u had a lott.....good shyt
flow: agony..good shyt wit dat..i liked da sound of ur verse
metaz: ...... not sure...
vote: kaos....no hate****~1~*****
yo plzeeee im beggin yall 2 vote on mah shyt...im sleeeepppinnnn on it...... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101521