okay
10 bars max
no d/r votes
no feeding
no crew votes
votes must be explained 1st to 5 you decide if we post at the same time or individually.

checkin in.....................do tha same...............................blind spit........................due 15 minutes or so form now..............well.....after you check in.................gl
peace

okay i like that will do................................................ .................................................. .......

When we battle my flows burn your verse and it just resinates
You saddle up for votes I earn'em wit punches you can never take
And you wanna elevate? Great!, fists give u scrapes an u levitate
Your life my spells'll take, wait, perfectly~worded you can relate
Neva heard'a'ya case, 1 an 8 open mic fien who battles in haste
I Attack to obliterate, leave not even a scattered liver trace
Tryin' to spit Lively ur a disgrace, you can't even decide on a place
Ny? or Italy you seem misplaced, hate to say it but figure out ur race
That's right i get real personal all in ya face, call me visinE? your late
I'm already dropped in ya eyes encased, took this W and sealed ur fate
Hang you like a christmas orniment, violate you like a 4:20 public ordinance
The spliff hits crisp sorta since, this herb is lit stiff hits be supportin kids
Knocked him off the radar, watched him on that cartoon Babar
WP cocky ass ta hate-on, favorite song is Outakst "Hey Ya'll"
Words dribbilin' like you play ball, flow run frantic like you gettin sprayed on
I Don't wanna delay Dawg..........
You get cut, Take L's like a slut, I'm the 9th cat ta put it in ya but
Thas the aim on tha gun shots what!?, i just murdered ur shit smut

this bombacloaude claim he from the drug spot but dont know shit aboute scales-
about sales-
he word of mouth my 10 bars the closest he comes to a sentence in jail.
my arsenal of verbs require weapons diagnostic when i serve herbs in toxic h20-
of coarse his name is VISINE thats the only way see me in a flow.
and like your post count in 7 you get 8-
anything you spit for free gets sent back....as wack with a request for rebate.
you just another lame-that spits the same...weak
how can i trust you wrote your verse when you copyinfringed your name.
your like tax fraud everything you account for is false claims.
this aint game but if it was you just got played like max payne-
and when im done with you....
you'll be a bad dick and fag joke like the careers of the wayans.
this a mismatch not a duel-
my spits battle some kids nursery druel-
i'll serve you with a jester cause you a fool.
thinken you gonna serve me with colorful wordplay-this ain serades-
that shit just relays in funny ways like strip spades for the rainbow parade.
you lucky this b-ball our id be thrown out for foulen-
cause im hitten you ....
the only W you get was a WU's 3rd album in shaolen.

uppin.....................uppin................... ..uppin.....................uppin................. ....uppin.....................uppin............... ......uppin.....................uppin............. ........uppin.....................uppin........... ..........uppin.....................uppin......... ............uppin.....................uppin....... ..............uppin.....................uppin..... ................uppin.....................uppin... ..................uppin.....................

pretty good battle...kinda weak...i expected betetr from word but all in all heres the break down...

Flow V
Punches Tie
Opener WP
Finisher Wp
Creativity WP

Overall WP, he had a more creative verse, V had a better structure but i dont think he came as hard vote WP

could you'z hit up my battle with an honest vote thanks it's in my sig

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i dunno min...i expected better from word but he still took this one....... by the way its bombaclot word not bombacloude or whatever you wrote....and visine....i love the name but dawg...that hey ya line killled ur verse...ruined it miserably...

yo vote on my battle on sigs for real and i'll feedback ya in the future

Verse-Wp
Flow-Wp
Punches-Wp
Multis-No1
Creativity-Vi
Feelin More-Wp
Overall-Wp He Came Better In All Subjects of this battle no doubt i liked his verse better and all

so vote on my bats pleaaaase don't sleep on em

aight here the break down




flow=tie
punches=word
concept=v
creativity=word
openin=v
on point=word
overall=.......................................... ......................
...................................wordplay



why i pick wp is because
1. v you killed it with the hey ya
2. i really expected harder punches from wp but it was to my satisfaction
and 3. ya both did good but this battle need to elevate

the best luck to both of ya
and dont forget i got a battle comin up so check that out

aight yo ~1~

this bombacloaude claim he from the drug spot but dont know shit aboute scales-
about sales-
he word of mouth my 10 bars the closest he comes to a sentence in jail.
ok...
my arsenal of verbs require weapons diagnostic when i serve herbs in toxic h20-
of coarse his name is VISINE thats the only way see me in a flow.
gettin better
and like your post count in 7 you get 8-
anything you spit for free gets sent back....as wack with a request for rebate.
hahaha
you just another lame-that spits the same...weak
how can i trust you wrote your verse when you copyinfringed your name.
your like tax fraud everything you account for is false claims.
this aint game but if it was you just got played like max payne-
first 3 lines, wack, last line, nice
and when im done with you....
you'll be a bad dick and fag joke like the careers of the wayans.
this a mismatch not a duel-
my spits battle some kids nursery druel-
i'll serve you with a jester cause you a fool.
startin to slack...
thinken you gonna serve me with colorful wordplay-this ain serades-
that shit just relays in funny ways like strip spades for the rainbow parade.
back at it, nice
you lucky this b-ball our id be thrown out for foulen-
cause im hitten you ....
the only W you get was a WU's 3rd album in shaolen.
ok finishyer


When we battle my flows burn your verse and it just resinates
You saddle up for votes I earn'em wit punches you can never take
firin' it up
And you wanna elevate? Great!, fists give u scrapes an u levitate
Your life my spells'll take, wait, perfectly~worded you can relate
ok personal
Neva heard'a'ya case, 1 an 8 open mic fien who battles in haste
I Attack to obliterate, leave not even a scattered liver trace
nice
Tryin' to spit Lively ur a disgrace, you can't even decide on a place
Ny? or Italy you seem misplaced, hate to say it but figure out ur race
nice multiz
That's right i get real personal all in ya face, call me visinE? your late
I'm already dropped in ya eyes encased, took this W and sealed ur fate
nicest bar so bar, call that fire department!!
Hang you like a christmas orniment, violate you like a 4:20 public ordinance
The spliff hits crisp sorta since, this herb is lit stiff hits be supportin kids
ok, nice vocab tho, but not great...
Knocked him off the radar, watched him on that cartoon Babar
WP cocky ass ta hate-on, favorite song is Outakst "Hey Ya'll"
um...
Words dribbilin' like you play ball, flow run frantic like you gettin sprayed on
I Don't wanna delay Dawg..........
You get cut, Take L's like a slut, I'm the 9th cat ta put it in ya but
Thas the aim on tha gun shots what!?, i just murdered ur shit smut
hahaha, nice solid closer!

ok, close ass battle
but visine got this
he had betta flow and punches multiz, and creatv.
while wp had structure, complex,
but visine got the win category


i liked this battle, keep it up

*props*

^ i agree............i think v's personals were better............and his punches those a little less complex......hit harder.........i dunno what the other people in this thread are talkin about......
break-down
punches - v
dissing/personals - v
vocab/complexity - wp
flow - tie
structure - v
opener - wp
closer - definitley v

overall....v........

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