here it is

good luck lets have a good battle
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Yo ima open this song up spittin electricity/
nothin is spit simplicitly cuz i never come consistently/
i understand how you come, worse than amtracks crashing/
your rap career came and went quicker than lightning bolts flashing/
This bitch's determinations off the charts, but his lyrics are definatlly not/
He'll set his Keybaord on Fire, and tells himself that if he types then people will think his bars are hot/
Go ahead and try to spit tight but ur shits blind, like a boat in the water guided by moonlight/
make ya stutter when ya spit more times than an edited version of one mic/
I'm the mountain, next to me your barely even a bump in the ground/
your success rate is worse than that of blind people searching in lost and found/

Goin' back to basics for this, I've given up on complex shit/
Ultimately un-needed, I'm facing a g-unit fan thats dyslexic/
Three losses kid? I'm expecting some played label references/
Includin the 'Big L' I've named your 5 bar punch preferences/
With that shit you'll never 'elevate yaself above the front lines'/
'Like ya elders in trench warfare' , you can't stand correct with no spine/
I.C.U peeped my old battles just now.. lookin for something/
I've put 2 + 2 together tho 'n like you it amounts to nothin/
Droppin 5 mins after check-in...... some real hardcore spittin/
-30 seconds a bar......fool, tell me that shit ain't pre-written/

lets see who won then
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lets get some votes in here

alright i give my vote to The Aftermath and here is why..
structure- Stretches lines fuck up your flow ICU you gotta watch out for that shit ..also just a tip stop using these...../////
flow- has to go to Aftermath agian cause your stretched lines fucked up your flow but no hate dawg..
punches- both had some nice ones.....i give this one to ICU..tryed harder
personals...dyslexic G unit fan ..eheh that won it for you..
overall aftermath...both y'all show me love vote on this if its still open one..

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=99130

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Aftermath takes this with better punches, format, and wordplay.

I.C.U. most definately takes the metas and the fucked up structure.

Nice battle, wasn't too long.

Didn't suck for me to read.

Peace

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