10 lines you spit first

mods close this battle dude is duckin me................................................ .................................................. ..........................

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Hand me da mic....


Dis nigga aint got shit on me but spitting bad grades,
watch and see when i cut him with my mentaly razor blades,
my words are like spitballs they fly at you like flying confetti,
imma slice you up mentally and physically hit you with a machetti,
imma play you like a game make you dramatized,
get dis mic a new name and make u look un organized,
playas like you have to have their license and permit registration,
but thugs like me play and thug if it was a everyday generation,
so dont even think about spittin back make it not yo routine,
haha after im done this will be a mentally murder scene....

lol you suck man.. im a make it short and sweet
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I SPLITS WIGS, and fuckin RIPS PRICKS
just to help him out i infected this BITCH KIDS saliva glands with aids and he still couldnt SPIT SICK..lol

its so clever the WAY YOUR DEALT, I'LL will penetrate your skin and make all the LAYERS MELT

dont get mad at me that your assholes been penetrated more than a airport CONVEYER BELT(lol)

maybe you should just SPRAY YOUR SELF


cuz your apperiance just leaves niggas SHOOK.. your probably the first person to get fired from radio cuz of their LOOKS

Ill destroy you in this BOUT AND TEAR YA SPLEEN with about a THOUSAND PAIR OF SCHEMES
ill burn this fag worse than a person getting sent to hell DOUSED IN KEROSENE (Damn!)

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aiight man.. first up................................................ .................................................. ....................................

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damn second up what do you got to do to get votes on this board............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........................

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Dis nigga aint got shit on me but spitting bad grades,
watch and see when i cut him with my mentaly razor blades,
weak
my words are like spitballs they fly at you like flying confetti,
imma slice you up mentally and physically hit you with a machetti,
weak
imma play you like a game make you dramatized,
get dis mic a new name and make u look un organized,
weak again
playas like you have to have their license and permit registration,
but thugs like me play and thug if it was a everyday generation,
doesn't make sense
so dont even think about spittin back make it not yo routine,
haha after im done this will be a mentally murder scene....
doing stuff mentally (my mind is my gun etc) is played


I SPLITS WIGS, and fuckin RIPS PRICKS
just to help him out i infected this BITCH KIDS saliva glands with aids and he still couldnt SPIT SICK..lol
flow could be better but good punch
its so clever the WAY YOUR DEALT, I'LL will penetrate your skin and make all the LAYERS MELT
dont get mad at me that your assholes been penetrated more than a airport CONVEYER BELT(lol)
same as above....
maybe you should just SPRAY YOUR SELF
cuz your apperiance just leaves niggas SHOOK.. your probably the first person to get fired from radio cuz of their LOOKS
played, but ok
Ill destroy you in this BOUT AND TEAR YA SPLEEN with about a THOUSAND PAIR OF SCHEMES
ill burn this fag worse than a person getting sent to hell DOUSED IN KEROSENE (Damn!)
[b]first part doesn't make sense, second is ok[b]

This one goes to , but work on your structure man.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093

ok this is my 3rd up................................................ .................................................. .....................

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kinda weak...

snakes was just a move between physical and mental, sayin that over and over, too much reuse. and the punches werent too good either.

had some pretty good punches, but the structure was off. work on that flow, but the wordplay was pretty good too.

vote:

i spend time on your battles, so fuckin return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...adid=102139--vs 730

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...readid=101943-- vs prophacyz

shit 4th up.. to bad niggas cant take their time to vote in fuckin battles........................................... .................................................. .....

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DAMN MY LAST UP IN THIS BATTLE CAN WE VOTE IN THIS SO I CAN GET MY KO................................................ .................................................. .......

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uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............

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Snakes lyrics were played out, too simple, I wasn't feelin' it that much, buddy took this, better punches, overal flow, creativity, etc.. Good shit

Return da fava
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103798

damn uppin the votes are 3 to 0 me can we get this shit over with please............................................ .................................................. .................

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