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I got the same venom that a snake spits
Been on enough trips to know this
Rapped enough times,do i show lists
Hurt enough time wit my slit wrists
Experience is the truth to my success
Anger and hate keep me ruthless
Had enough shit from the racists
They all have issues and clueless
If my father could see me how i have succeeded
Hope he can see how i cried and bleeded
Hope he can see this and read it
When he was away when he was needed
Useless muthafucker isnt worth me
Couldnt be part or try to be a family
Why did this muthafucker go and leave me
Hope he rots in hell and signs a death treaty
With the devil and he makes his life hell
Let him drop whenever he tumbled and fell
I wont be happy until i hear his death bell
Only the future will tell, what happens to this so called dad
He's the dad i wish i never had
When he rots in hell only then will i be glad
Fuck you my so called dad
I envy the guy who buries that man
When he dies i will do whateva i can
To slander the name of the improper scum
To hate the one who i spawned from
Crush his dynasty with 10 tonne
Kill his other offspring with anthrax poison
Im not full of hate and despise
Sometimes i wish i could look deep into his eyes
Ask him why left and went away
Why him why he didnt have the courage to help and stay
Sometimes i kneel down and beg and pray
That i can have an answer for his dissapearance
Just an explanation for his absense
A different smell from his insense
Gettin his opinion more intense
Hate is a easy word to say
But hate is even harder to play
Just make sure that when you hate love is away
Thats wat a nigga gotta say

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alot of anger channel'd in this it seems....expressive drop... would have flowed a bit better if the syllables were evened out n lengthened.....but the content was good i thought and executed with feeling..you could up the scheme some tho..but..good read....pZ...
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