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You've been sonned

kaos a battle emcee? how is that when you bite more than da tigers from da show of siegfried and roy/
when christmas time came around you was asking for a bike, while a mic was my option of toy/(1)

on ya own you can't recite a verse you bite on da mic like da holyfield fight reversed/
i know the plans of me not sonning you bothers you and deep inside you it hurts/(2)

open ya eyes and realizes no one gives a fuck about you that's why we not showing you love/
you've been here since september and still you spit with that newbish style in your blood/(3)

maybe we need to bid you goodbye like cam and da rest/
cause i'm sure if the end had plans on letting niggas go on here that ya name would be next/(4)

CLOSER: listen! your punches are garbage, da only track you'll appear upon is da "running" type/
while most of your punchlines are bitten from otha people off of different sites

^^^You've been sonned.. its already written.. its time to face tha facts
ain't talking pants.. when i say your whole attempt at rapping slacks
You got an ice cream cones chance in a furnace.. to come out with tha win
Theories spitting at Aguhny's ankles.. cuz his talent only reaches his shin
Crushing this herb daily... dosen't leave that much room for a personal
So i'll inscribe Kaos on ya coffin... so that Aguhny's loss will be eternal
Urenal trying to spit? I'd tell you to piss off.. but you'd just run off yellow
You punch hard? They don't touch me.. even when i sleep on em' like a pillow
Don't be mistaken.. he's got skills.. plus talent<-- But thats where it goes wrong
...Cuz tha only skill Aguhny's got... Is going sun tanning with his clothes on

G/luck

nice verse thunny let's get these votes rolling holla............................................. .............................

well this was close

stucture:aughny
flow: ^^^
punches:kaos
orig: ^^^^^^
person:^^^^

overall:^^kaos^^


plz return the favor and vote fairly on my battle
i spent the time on you spend it on me
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103958

Kaos had some good punches like:
"ain't talking pants.. when i say your whole attempt at rapping slacks"
as opposed to the ones Augnhy had which i didnt feel at all.

Kaos also had both a better opener and closer.

Flow goes to Kaos again... I don't like Augs long draw out lines. Most of his stuff seems forced.

Vote is for Kaos

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104694

i ain't gonna type wtf i wanna say so i'mma just type (you two niggas need to really read da lines that's all)

Good battle...

Good effort from Ag.

Nice complexity, I liked where ya went a couple of times.

But, dude...

Shorten ya format and work on punching.
Most of ya actual disses were soft as hell.

Kaos hit personally, with wordplay, kept his format tight...

And won this battle, mostly, cuz his shit was harder.
And was funnier. (the "pillow" line)

Not very close, but not a blow out.

Kaos.

Peace

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aight.....close shit

imma place ma vote to kaos theory tho........his punches were mad nice.........opener was tight........closer was dope.........he had great wordplay in his verse..........aguhny had a gd verse, it was nice but lines were a bit stretched which made flow weaker............

both peeps were gd with descent verses but kaos edged it with better punches......

vote = kaos theory

peace

go bk and poll on ma battle vs. dizzy hommell

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103978