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Old 01-07-04, 01:02 PM   #1
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whats beef

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Idea stolen from tha BlackStar freestyle, me and my homeboy was fucking around so we put me after them (bad idea i wanted a Chingy freestyle or something to seperate us so i'd look dope)

I don't think ya'll understand what real beef Is/
beef is a dad having 2 wake up the day after helplessly watching his wife murder their Kids/
beef aint what happens when emcee's ego Collide/
beef is a 14 year old running out of reasons NOT to commit Suicide/
beef isn't what you internet nerds do behind a desk typing Reckless/
beef is when a young girl has 2 deal with knowing when she goes home she'll be Molested/
beef isn't what rappers Do/
beef is being black in a store the only reason these mouthafuckaz are following You/
beef isn't what happens in the music Biz/
beef is a 10 year old getting in a car wit somebody that enjoys murdering Kids/
beef aint what these clowns do on the Mic/
beef is an ex-valictorian taking his first hit of a crack pipe 2night/
or when an innocent man's life is ruined by the false charge of Rape/
thats the kind of shit u can't find on P.Cutta Mixtape/
when a mom is delighted when Bush said the war is Over/
then opening the door to the sight of a wooden box holding Soldier/
Beef isn't rappers claiming eachother is Shook/
Real Beef is the pain a man feels in jail getting his manhood Took/
Beef is that 11 year old hearing his mom cry cuz he has been sentenced to Die/
I don't understand why u think beef is hearing the lox Vs. Roc and choosing Sides/
Beef isn't that 50 shit with Snoop against Ja Rule/
Beef is a homeless man killing somebody,just cause in jail is the only way he'll get Food/
Beef is how that Baylor coach disrespected the Deceased/
Battle,Disagreement, Call it what you want whatever but never regard it as Beef/

i'll go talk shit about some other people's drops and put tha links
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Old 01-07-04, 01:07 PM   #2
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..Nice piece..it reminds of few months back when I seen 'Blackstar' on stage..when they did "what's Beef?'..
good flow...good content...nice multis...nice piece...

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Old 01-07-04, 01:12 PM   #3
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yeah i just finished listenning to that shit so i just went off it and did this
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Old 01-07-04, 01:59 PM   #4
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upping
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Old 01-07-04, 02:05 PM   #5
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reminds me of that can jam, drama, good shit tho, worded well, flowed good...
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Old 01-07-04, 02:32 PM   #6
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i like the hole flow to it you didnt disrespect ganstars shit at all. which is real good.and i realy like concepts on what beff is. my only beff is you should try to put those ideas on your own song. but other then that it was good
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Old 01-07-04, 03:40 PM   #7
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1 open mic per day....follow the rules.
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