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da jack(off) wanna piss an fumble words... I pummle nerds
who get on the internet an think they the shit(thers nothin worse)
than a queer as mutha fuka who step an wanna talk smack
you betta walk back,to tha backa da line.. white.we gon chalk that
its a lyrical homicide an niggaz they wanna bomb back
like palestinians in west bank im Marshall so Faulk that
an fuck Bush an fuck u..u a bitch ass cracka dont talk back
tha administration got a hole as big as ya ass crack
im past that so go on play wit this niggas emotions
i blazes triggaz an play bitches like riggaz in oceans
my notions like love potions to ya snitches in postin



that sucked but im drunk so fuck what you thunk
I posted cuz a no show is fucked up

Im Bustin this Nerds Mouth Open So Hes Incapable Of Speakin..
When I Ruff This Tuff Herb Up Hes Seekin 4 Hospitol Treatment..
Lost In Defeatment.They Way Im Reapin Its Suicidal..
Head Leakin.Punches Fallen Short Like Midget Ski Divers..
U Started This Rival, But Im Here To Leave ya Left Bleedin...
Cuz Like Empty Dictionaries, Ya Rhymes Have No Meanings..
Ya Feining For Dem Votes ,But U Wont see One Punk..
Why?Cuz I was Hi N U Keyed ya Shit When u Was Drunk..
I Brought the Funk Quick to Diminish This Bitch When i Flip Scrits
At The End Of this Setence Mark Ya Name Off My Hit List..
Cuz Im A Menace Tryna Finish This Shit That I Started..
Hard Shit.I Knock Bricks Till i Define u As The Example Of a STarving Artist....

uppin for sum votes.....
been slepted on.....
need sum feedback on this site..maybe sum votes drop a link ill hit it up honestly..
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all i can say is country elevate

Jacka came with actual punches.. not just a bunch of talk
Not that many personals but... jacka had flow and shit
nice merking......and nice multies too

so

v/Jacka

can you poll vote.... i think you forgot....thanks

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iight...

country... elevate... dont talk about yourself... and punch...

jacka... you actually punched him... therefore you won this... obvious really...

elevate...

vote - Da Jacka...

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Thanks for the vote can sumone else hit this up
shit i have to vote on cats battles to get votes.
so drop a link ill Vote on it..aite....

but vote honestly...
no dik riders..shits gay
just vote honestly

Jacka swarmed his opponent with nice wordplay...
Good punches.
A flowing flow.
And some decent vocab.
Solid verse

Country...

Learn to direct your punches...
Threats and "what will be's" aren't actually hits.
And in no way is self-prop gonna win tha battle.

For punches and good flow (multi's)...

Jacka

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this battle was kinda weak.....first dude just came with mad fillers and shit, if you were drunk then u shoulda said so and got an extenstion.....<-no excuse for spittin weak....

jack came with some weak punches and shit but they were punches none the less....freshen your concepts and buffen up your hits...you aight....

vote Jacka

please return the fav http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105811

iight...

ive voted already... forgot to post my link... sorry... my bad...

hit this up please...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107007

thanks...

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