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5 | 100.00% |
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Token Vs. Brethren
IP: 6FFB C649
10 Lines.
No due time. Normal Rules. No hate votes. No crew votes. No d/r votes. Good luck. Brethren is allowed to battle in here for this one battle.
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Fuck yo couch
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IP: C010 5BAD
Check,
Yo thanks, make it hot, I'd like to get into elite. O yea, No feeding Good luck
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Fuck yo couch
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IP: EEE0 F448
Hey, and Token, if you can, could you vote on some of my battles? I'm not getting the karma I deserve, I vote like every 10 seconds.
This is bullshit, watch after I post this, there is 19 views now, watch it go to like 300 after I post this
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Fuck yo couch
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IP: E2C0 DA90
You chose-to-duel, and you can't-correct-it, like a stroke-till-drool,
Man-don't-tempt-it, "Your-flows-my-fuel", but if I bite your verse, I'd go anorexic, Token's just-afraid to drop shit, like a house-broken-dog, Must-be-crazed, "out-*tok-en*-smog", You lost like you were out-in-open-fog, Tear-your-ligaments, till you can't be recongnized, like "sharing-fingerprints", I'm wreckin-guys, "imparing-vision"-since Token battled me, cat's left on his second-live, Like "Tekken-guys", 'flawless-victory', no-need-to-fight, Token already lost-his-dignity, Proceed-to-bite, I'll cover your head in red, like *crossing-pigmenting*, "Next-biter, this dudes gayer than the "Flintstones-theme-song", You're *ex-sited* from this battle, you bit-your-whole-scheme-wrong. Explainations: 1) You can't correct a stroke, you drool when you lost control from a stroke 2) Anorexia is the disorder where you are afraid of eating 3) House broken means they have been trained to shit outside 4) Toking, Token, wordplay, plus you are lost in open fog 5) You can't be recognized without fingerprints, duh, 6) Cat's have 9 lives, killed him once, goes to 2nd live 7) I thought it said flawless victory in Tekken 8) Cover head in red, blood. Pigment changes the color of hair. 9) "We'll have a gay old time!!!!" Remember the Flintstones song? 10) Ex-sited, excited, wordplay.
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IP: F7ED CA3D
Blah, No time.
This is funny.. Toke vs. you? There's no words to express this ...Mind if I call you Ren? Cuz I'm leaving you Brethless Heavy weight my ass.. I'll remove the weight off your chest I'll handcuff your verse just so you'll give it arrest You stepped to this battle.. and tripped on the welcome mat ...Kid seems like a prep.. So where the hell is his structure at See.. I thought you would be dope.. I anticipated dopeness .. But found you to be like Bob without a last name.. Hopeless I'm just going to end this quick.. Just like your life line I'll have your waste material leaking out like a broken pipe line
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IP: F7ED CA3D
Moved to Front Lines now that his other battle has been closed
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IP: 5203 B663
Token took this with harder punches. I mean Berthen tried he came oright hes structure was just fucked up which made it hard to get into his shit. Token was direct and killed him
vote - Token plz return a honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105253 |
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IP: F7ED CA3D
Uppin 1
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IP: 650E E7FE
token got this because of better punches and better flow
token had better structure and overlaly had a better verse brethren had a good verse but i disnt think that his punches hit as hard my vote-token hit these up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105343 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105342 i took the time to vote on this so please return the favor |
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IP: 7A5E D5B8
Basicly...Token takes it because he wasnt herbish..
I mean Bretheren wasnt that bad..but That seperated bar shit & useless puncutation..is wack. Also content wise, i feel token had the upper hand.. Wack bob line..but the rest made up for it. Token needs to take his ass to Elite..or elevated.. Stop takin up all my free wins ![]() vote Token |
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IP: 6B62 135C
i dont think this was evenly matched at all... token had better wordplay... and most importantly harder punches... and thats what opinion goes on,,,, so vote=token.....short reply, but true
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IP: EC0B 84C7
i give it to token, his structure was better brethren came hard just not quite hard enough the structure killed the energy in his verse still it was decent
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IP: F7ED CA3D
Thanks..
uppin 2
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You talkin to me?
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IP: 6F22 C72E
here's tha breakdown:
Brethren - liked the rhyme sceme, punches were aight, best line: "You chose-to-duel, and you can't-correct-it, like a stroke-till-drool, Man-don't-tempt-it, "Your-flows-my-fuel", but if I bite your verse, I'd go anorexic," if you came like this the whole way through... you might have gotten my vote, but you fell off right after that... the rest weren't really punches, and nothin special. You got potential though Token - witty verse, liked this one: "Heavy weight my ass.. I'll remove the weight off your chest I'll handcuff your verse just so you'll give it arrest" LOL Toke takes this for better punches & originality but Breth you got some skillz man, no beef pz yall hit my shit up with Rappad w/ an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105445 |
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