http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...581#post1067581

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...592#post1067592

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...615#post1067615


no prizes for guessing what this piece is inspired by.


its night-time, i'm outside in my martial art gear/
throwing punches, meditating, the sky is so clear/
i know my heritage and curse of moonlight/
but i'm pitted mentally to the challenge i'd soon fight/
i feel the tail in the back and its twitching to hell/
like a rattlesnake, and soon ill be switching as well/
my ape-nature, is the reason my race stays greater/
we can demonlish whole worlds with our power, repent later/
i cant help it, my eyes are drawn inevitably skyward/
i'm paralyised, my stare is fixed and pain is the by word/
i feel the tension in my muscles spreading like wildfire/
i let out a scream like my tendons are sliced by live wires/
the feel the fangs in my mouth and my pupils dialate/
wishing i'd die but this orb carries with it a different fate/
growing in stature beyond any mortal man/
and no mortal man could ever thwart my plans/
the oozaru's make king kong look like small chimps/
in the palm of one hand they could crush tall blimps/
i've lost control, my empathy with the world is gone/
reason avoids me, all calming words are none/
i let out a roar straight from the home of the damned/
and with earth shaking steps i started roaming the lands/

(edited to change the wording on the last line)

those were nice multis
and its tight specially
cuzz u rode off of a Cartoon
theme ya kno that shit iz
tight tho real tight
good flow too.

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Nuff Said

i'm sorry, i dont know what the hell this was inspired from.......was it just the human race you were talking about? that makes the most sense to me...maybe i just didnt read it well enough

but lyrical wise, this was a dope peice, the descriptions of the oozaru's were dope and original, very interesting stuff

return the favor

peace

one word: "dragonball". uppin this^^

This was pretty decent here man ... Sum nice lines in there ... The flow of it was pretty consistent ... I didn't know wat inspired this neither ... But for wat it was it was a nice piece ... Keep it up ... Peace