10-20 lines
no crew, hate, d/r
due an hour from checkin
he spits first

good luck

------------------Checking In--------------
How long do i have the lyrics 4 as i need to go quick..

one hour...spit now............
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I think this is crap but i need to go the now!!!!!!!!!!

These are your last words, there aint gonna be no doc_Knoc sequel
unlike 1 plus 1, us 2 aint equal
I just robbed this win from you like lyrical criminals
my rhymes will have you see the light like biblical miracles
I elevated to excellence, been there, done that, and past it
I spit rhymes that'll burn your throat like Citrious Acid
thinkin I wont attack you is like lightin a fire and expectin it not to burn
you checked in, thats it, now its your point of no return
your better off with your cock in your hand
cause your just playin with yourself if you think our equality stands
Ima school you cause my punches come in courses
I'll burn you up with more rhymes then natural resources
the Freestyle God, my lyrical skill will never supside
cause when Jesus walked on water, I raced him to the other side

sorry got to go bye

its a simple task in front of me, and ima get it done
burn this hotdog to a crisp, like a bitch on the sun
cuz i dont play when i spit shit, i only speak truth
cuz ima leave you dead and buried, bloated fatter than babe ruth
how you gone come around here showin all that disrespect
bitch im the diety above god, now who the fuck has been wrecked?
im tired of fuckin newb's comin and actin like they got flow
how many dope mc's from scotland? hmm, nobody knows
you just another copy, a replica for doc to sit down
take that stupid off ya face, turn that smile upside down
cuz im gon kill you, slice with a knife to the neck
the only shit youll ever say on a mic is "ummm, check check"
so take ya holy shit, and go back home to mom
cuz this is a battleground, your style has just been bombed


....we'll see.

uppin fo voooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooootes
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These are your last words, there aint gonna be no doc_Knoc sequel
unlike 1 plus 1, us 2 aint equal
^nice line...good rhyme...not much of a punch though...3/10

I just robbed this win from you like lyrical criminals
my rhymes will have you see the light like biblical miracles
^good flow...again, not a very good punch...3/10

I elevated to excellence, been there, done that, and past it
I spit rhymes that'll burn your throat like Citrious Acid
^second line is good...like it...prolly the best one so far..first one...BLAH!...5/10

thinkin I wont attack you is like lightin a fire and expectin it not to burn
you checked in, thats it, now its your point of no return
^top line was aight...slightly played out though....second line was okay too...7/10

your better off with your cock in your hand
cause your just playin with yourself if you think our equality stands
^TERRIBLE!...BLAH!...1/10

Ima school you cause my punches come in courses
I'll burn you up with more rhymes then natural resources
those are two of the better lines...the second line better than the first...i'll give ya that one...6/10

the Freestyle God, my lyrical skill will never supside
cause when Jesus walked on water, I raced him to the other side
^yet another bible reference?...hmm...interesting...not very good, but hey...thats just me...4/10

overall-29/70

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ayo, ima vote on this shit

both had nice flo, punches, etc.... but i think hotdog came wit it. he was ready and it showed...


fuck that killed it right there... knock you had a chance but you just didn't stay consistant wit your punches to kill em'

vote: hotdog

ayo... i got some battles to get down wit too
text
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104688

audio
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102425

hit em' up if you get a chance

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