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i can tell your a bitch you dont come with the right baratone
i can smell it in your pheremones
i'll make ya carry on
like fallen soliders burryin they own
i'll break every bone in your body and pull out ya spinal cord
i'll have you callin RB administrators lik"yo..dog this isn't what i signed up for"
im throwin jabs to your nose that will clear up your sinuses
and i'll leave ya lines grounded like i was working for verizon kid
you couldn't rip shit so why the hell you battlin
if this was the lyrical olympics you get impaled by the javelin

yte girl when you gonna spit?????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????

yte grl where you at?............................................... .................................................. ............................................

what the fuck this kid obviously doesnt have a life/
ur wakin up next to girls wit no teeth like obie trice/
please tell me this bitch isnt white/
if he is im changin my name i aint got no pride/
ur like the of road trip who put pb on his dick and had his dog lick it off/
oh my god u cant rhyme like a hurt cow u need to be shot/
you rhyme like ur a mexican nerd/
if u think ur winnin ur absurd/
when he gets older hes goin into the family buisness/
get ur chicklets on sale 2 for 3 dont miss it/

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structure: yte...yall had barely tho........structurez were offfff
punches:calis
humour: calis
opener:yte
closer:calis
if i culd vote....it'd b on calis.....

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Standup up!
when i move u move,(just liked dat?)
when i move u move,(just liked dat?)
hell yea ay DJ bring dat back!!![SIZE=5]

HiP HoP ReMiX
~*Flippin da' scripz*~

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calis shit was much better......better punches and multies.....you both need to work on structure......calis is my vote