the rules as you posted them...


10 Bars max.
No dick rides.
No hate votes.
No Used or biten verses.
must check in.



checkin in...

you spit first

iight checkin in.
post up quick b like withen the next hour or so iight.
Voters explain ya votes iight none of dat shit voting

iight look.

Dis kid wordplay cant even manage to play scrabble let alone string a good enough verse//
Leave this kid in his box every Mc that steps up 2 me gets the curse~fuk dat shit each one leaves in a hearse//

Grab da mic force it down his throat so him and his mum get some thing hard to Choke~on//
He only got me to drop first to fuel his ideas just a excuse to use my verse to feed~upon//

Id drop more dam 10 bars just the fact that he couldt last the pace wit a mc like me//
Blow this battle wide apart smash Word~away~from~play just like im spittin T.N.T//

My rhymes hack away at da skin to da bone like my tounge is a sword//
Ill put my hand throw ur back not even botherin to think just snap ur spinal cord//

iight done post up b

yea im still waitin fo ya dam verse b hurry up and post i seen u up on da forum and ya ant posted shit yet

even if I lost my torso, you'de be the one that's half as tight/
actin' like you grabbed a mic, any other time, than karaoke night/

you couldn't play with words, if one tapped you and yelled tag/
in a manner of speakin' I'll weaken your rhymes, till you fade away/


people told me to have a heart, go easy on em, fuck that, we've only got beef, cause his dad didn't wear a condom/


even with a phone call, you and skills wont connect/
if your prone to sweat, I bet you'll perspire to death/

I'll just match your bars ayite.. ya'll can vote now

uppin' for votes............................................. .....................


up up and aww fuck it....vote ya'll

uppin for votes again........................

,...........................................^^^^^^ ^^^^^^vote

open:word
closer:Ex
punches:Ex
enetertainment:Ex
flow:word
structure: Ex
metas:none
multis:none

vote-Ex
nice drops by both of u, but Ex make ur scentencss shorter

vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99100

in metas i meant to put Exception not none
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opener:wordplay
wordplay:tie
punches:word (exception your punches were too played)
personals:word
flow:exception
structure:exception
vocab:tie
multis:tie
overall:wordplay...both verses were okay, exception you have good flow and structure but your punches were kinda weak and you didn't use that many personals....
closer:word

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thanks for the vote diverse....still uppin' for votes


up up and aww fuck it ^^^^^^^^^vote ya'll

wordplay won this with better flow, strucutre, punches plus...
exception used a line thats used in so many verses its not even funny the hearse line is old so i wusnt feelint hat at all which almost ruined your verse sooo
My VOte-wordplay.... yall both vot eon the battles in my sig highlited in white... ThanX......
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mah votez on wordplay...both of yall waz good doe**********************************
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opener:wordplay
wordplay:tie
punches:word
personals:word
flow:word
structure:exception
vocab:tie
multis:word
overall:wordplay...