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To the "Can-I-Bitch" beat...

Peety, can you tell us about DR's and Perscriptions?

Heeeeere we go...

Now take a look around...what-a-ya see
...Not too many people that suck horribly
But just search up dizzy...but not just yet
Wait for him to hop off CarsonJet
His verse is like his Shirt, cant read it much
Turn his hat frontward and say hes Dutch
"Shutup Peety, your not good enough to win"
"Carson came harder, even when I sit and spin"
So jizz bitch...does ya punches even hit?!
Make ya lip split from another stiff dick
That ya suck and spit...
More shit drips from ya chin than a Porno flick
CarsonJet wants to whip ya ass bitch
Cool whip grips to the top of his mouth that sticks
3 and 5...battle me and up comes number 6
Like a lottery pick...lucky to battle dizzy prick
Spit on his pic, looks like someone already has
"Grew up on the streets"?! Nope, not gonna ask!!!
Pass the Open Mic, open it as see you have
Not some dicks, but a big bad Peety thats owful mad

Hommel, ooh yes thats you
Where can I-I find this jew
Maybe in a bag of dicks
Suckin' it...all over his lips
Hommel, ooh yes thats you
Are you Jet's, thrusts and fuel
His wings and view, or testi's too
dizzy who?
o...
dizzy who?

Now I seen him come into my battle and all
Not knowin' he was playin' with Carson's balls
Told him to get off and he full of sperm particals like balls has no rules
dizzy who
I dick slap this fool
Lovin' it too, actually thinkin' "man, that was cool"!!!
But my duel's aint cool to pull bullets in cum mouth pools
And its pretty obvious that this kid wants more
Postin' a pic that peeps be crackin' on like drug stores
Ya ears is doors, open to my words that form...you a flamer, ya spit is warm
But not only Carson, search around for it and you'll come up to find what looks like Gay Porn
Ahha..."Peety, your not gonna win this turn!!!"
Nigga, I sun you 'til your ass is lyrically burnt
Then you come up and start get verbally offensive
Bitch, if you cuss ad me, I'll appoint you a dentist
So if you really wanna start this beef then bring it up
I start off with the buns, while ya ass needs to ketch-up
Ooh word...I found out hommel cant match
Like his words they pop first...then crackle and snap
From his cap, he dont know where he at...get him a map
And buy you a green card to match ya hat

Hommel, ooh yes thats you
Where can I-I find this jew
Maybe in a bag of dicks
Suckin' it...all over his lips
Hommel, ooh yes thats you
Are you Jet's, thrusts and fuel
His wings and view, or testi's too
dizzy who?
o...
dizzy who?

So a few minutes past and dizzy lookin' sick
Maybe from all the seaman from Carson's tip
Gobbled it up with a shift sip to the lip
...shit...
Shit, I'm about to make myself sick
Wait, I finally got it...we can use my car
Drive this DR over to NBC...he can star in ER!!!
Hommel finally pased out so I pop him up in my trunk
Hit the gas...*pfff*...what was that?...Slim Thug punk
Ooh well, hopefully that mo-fucka dead
No...I'm see it happen while runnin' over his head
Shit...his neck caught up in both the axles
Ooh well, only 5 hours to the hospital
While my foot stuck on the gas...hear a constant thumpin'
Wait...I left Walter Wall in there...they most likely humpin'
So I think about it...what happened to that Slim Thug dude
Riiight, got caught up in the axles...then went *poof*
"What happened to the dicks that you licked and flicked the ticks on ya chin that stinks out like chick flick"
Plus, he cant have a win...just all hopin'
*Slurp slurp slurp slup* "What was that"...dick cum gulpin'
So I creep up to the road when he last rode dick
The cum stains were blaintent, along with a pile of sticks (faggots)
The odor smelt alittle like a Jet has flown
Thought if I thrown a quarter the location is OWNed
So I OWN it once
And again for fun
Think it's done
This dudes like a piece of roll
He's like Carson...assume a biter in a mask
And he cant punch back...I cracked his glass
Is that so???!!!
This bitch keeps on suckin' to blow
Throw a punch or a diss...let the crown go "OOOO"
Stop suckin', throw back 'til you see T-K-O
TKO ya in the face because I hate ya faggot ass
Still no punchline...hear, use some knuckles of brass
Explain the DR method...I just want to ask
I dont do that shit...its only you that cum blasts
I roll on the floor, like floorin' gas and all
New Years...hmmm...guessin' you droped Carson's ball!!!
Suddenly I hear him cryin' in awww
Maracualisy see a harnd from under the car
It's Aisle 5!!!
Another nigga that likes guys!!!
So I start attackin' him with Best Food Buys
KO this bitch
Yeah...KO this bitch once more
*Yonkers*
Yup...take the poundin' like a full grown whore
KO him
"Switch paws"
KO him
"Switch again"
Finally he dead...I was about to get him
So dizzy no where in sight again
Probably back with Walter in the trunk again

Hommel, ooh yes thats you
Where can I-I find this jew
Maybe in a bag of dicks
Suckin' it...all over his lips
Hommel, ooh yes thats you
Are you Jet's, thrusts and fuel
His wings and view, or testi's too
dizzy who?
o...
dizzy who?

***Bamp bamp bamp bamp bamp***

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My people skills are way better then yours, nigga..

Hope that is not one of your replys for your own. Not good enough. And can people actually "read" it?!

well...the first couple verse wern't two great..was a bit of a mamouth to read through..nuthin really stood out to much..just your averages diss's

but

the last verse had me laughin out loud..lol some funny shit..no hard hittin punchs just straight funny shit...you shudnt of made this so long...lol hardly anyone will read the whole thing...

id say fix the structure n work on gettin the humor in with punchs

overall

good job..but nothing special

Nah, it has to be that long. I got the instrumental from Em's song "Can-I-Bitch" and went with it.

my bad

never saw the small writing at the top

lol