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20 - 25 minutes

Ight, No hate notes, no crew votes......

Bonespitter,

You bout to be dispised by every voter and judge /
They call this kid bonespitter,
cuz he swallows dick and spits up cum /
You couldn't fit in my Lugz, Never the less /
walk in my steps / It'd be like a lil kid
walkin in mens sz 10's / Till the end /
I'm reapin this bitch,
Cuz he couldn't come hard even if,
Halle berry was squeezin his dick /
Your rhyme's are like sewer pipes,
Pure Pieces of shit /

Didn't really get to finish off how I wouldve like to since its only 10-12 lines...but thats better on yer part

what? michael madness is tha name of da bitch
he tried to join jakson 5, and changed to faggin six
you need help sista, your rhymes arent flowin
youl never flow better, even thrown in da ocean
your rhymes are nothing, im at work and still doing beta
you caught me laughin, ill cut you up and serve you on a plata
your rhymes must be hidden, cause they lost and neva be found
im tha king of this battle, say i might as well have been crowned
this is a rap leavin at ten, cause the forfit you have takin
guy needs a magical pen, bitch cause your lost in rap heaven

Pretty one-sided...

Bonespitter takes it with ease... both were pretty wack tho..
MM work on your structure for sure... the flow was non-existant.. punches were okay compared but worded real wack..
Bonespitter basically had the better flow.. wordplay etc... weaker punches I thought... but presented in a much better way makin them effective at least...

Vote - Bonespitter

need votes uppin for 2 .................................................. .................................................. ...............................3.................. ..................4.........5

damn bonespitter literally spit dis bitches bones all over ..WHAck...micheal was too weak........
bone got every categorie i aint doin the breakdown
vote=bonespitter
keep elvatin yall
peace

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uppin fo 3 uppin upppin brin on tha votes
once this ones done im ready to battle again . .................................................. ......
uppin fo 3

Bonespittter got this one. His puches were way more creative and hit alot harder.
I like this line "what? michael madness is tha name of da bitch
he tried to join jakson 5, and changed to faggin six" made me laugh--nice
Mike just didnt have any real clever punches or anything.

OVERALL- B Spitter more comlex shit
Good battle

Bonespitter gets my vote. MM has improved from the lasttawdry display, but he couldn't handle the onslaught in my estimation. Quite frankly, he had it won from the Faggin' 6 line for me

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Both of yall ripped it but i gotta give this one to the kid called bonespitter. He ate my man lyrically on this one but michael madness you was alright too lil homie.

uppin fo 4 give me some votes common im ready to battle someone else. .................................................. .. uppin fo 4

well... like some one stated earlier both were weak..
but we all have to start some where...
MM...you need to work on your structure..
make it look more like this...

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make your lines even and ...make sure thelast word in each line rhymes..
makes it easier to read that way...
work on punches and vocab...and try to throw in some personals..they always help your verse...

Bones..the only reason you win is because your was easier to read..and you had
better flow and structure..
punches didnt do it for me at all..but its cool...the more you battle the better you will get...
work on harder punches...and personals...

no hate here fellas..both can do better..
just keep battlin..and read vet battles alot too... they help with creativity and style..

vote=bonespitter

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