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Old 01-14-04, 05:33 PM   #1
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:Chorus:
refresh my memory of the taste of your kiss....
you kissed me sexily and said "almost like this..."
our love is everlasting in a bond which lasts forever...
this gunna be my last kiss, last kiss from you ever...

:Verse 1:
i cant remember the last time i tasted you lips...
we was finally making out under a lunar eclispe...
wished upon a shootin start that u would come back...
i didnt mean what i said, i can always switchback...
our bond is forever and i want to share it always...
milkshakes and movies on weekends and thursday...
our love was once lost and i cant think of it disapearing...
i cant find what was once true love in a wide open clearing...
our sparks are igniting and we are seperating farther away...
maybe we could get together.. someday that is faraway...

:Chorus:
refresh my memory of the taste of your kiss....
you kissed me sexily and said "almost like this..."
our love is everlasting in a bond which lasts forever...
this gunna be my last kiss, last kiss from you ever...

:Verse 2:
nights are getting longer and my hear is in dispair...
i called you 3 times and u left saying u didnt care...
i ordered roses and chocolates and warm bears...
im chasing for you while your ordering your airfares...
i cant be without you, a hole is getting bigger in my heart...
the hole is darkning without you there, my sweetheart...
my eyes tear as i see you board away into my "death"
im choking with tears, you couldnt even hear my breaths...
u fade away out of my site as my eyes tear in misery...
i saw you for the last time.. and 3 words.. My Everlasting Love...

:Chorus:
refresh my memory of the taste of your kiss....
you kissed me sexily and said "almost like this..."
our love is everlasting in a bond which lasts forever...
this gunna be my last kiss, last kiss from you ever...
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Old 01-14-04, 05:41 PM   #2
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This had a ill chorus..almost like i was actually hearing..Verses were well done..you kept it flowin pretty decent throughout the whole piece..I too am in the same situation as this song..but except my ex is still here but it seems like shes so far away...When you get a good girl you jus have to keep her...Anyway man..mad props on this..loved the subject..the nucleus and climax of this was hot

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Old 01-14-04, 06:18 PM   #3
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This was alright...good to see you stuck to the topic ay...some places it was a little simple but it was pretty good...not bad...good story telling while still flowing and all but yeah just get on top of the vocab and that and you'll be on track..keep rhymin bro...ANd Hit My piece up "I Always Leave My Lights On"...
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Old 01-14-04, 06:47 PM   #4
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^ i will
thanks for oppinions..
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