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Old 01-09-04, 02:23 PM   #1
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UndaStand.....with lyrics

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LOL, people like to accuse me of jus rappin fast not saying real shit,y'all need to UndaStand,I'm a fuckin rapid rhyme lyricist,lol.....Kronik from C4 got the hook and 1st two verses I got the last 1....please listen from start to finish.......thanx.....lyrics for my verse below


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Just gimmie a pen and some paper-bet that I fade ya-do me a favor-soon as I blaze ya-just say ya-UndaStand--that you under a man- succumb to a plan of a pen and a pad- pen in the hand-hen in the lab- reason Im leavin men in a bag --blurtin out verbs and nouns got your head hurtin now- nothin more to worry about just put your shirt in your mouth -because it's closed curtains now-- go head and call your crew -I'll maul a few if not all of you-acid spit be gnawin thru -the hardest fucker leavin your hearts punctured- break apart your whole structure- flows like none other -flow mo hotter than summer -lips begin to glow from the deadly high temp words I utter- left in a lyrical hearse unda covers -find anotha rhyme you could muster just anotha time you smothered- rhyme you Busta- I'll flip the mode of your whole squad- no prob- hold on -your life is slippin- rhymes be like a knife rippin- the guys nice wit the written and spittin dismissin the bitches known as opposition no competition
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Old 01-11-04, 01:05 PM   #2
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feelin the beat...beat is kinda low though...

flow is hott , its very on point

dilivery is coo, needs a lil words, its hard to hear what u say some times..

not really feeling the second guy, he mumbles to much and lacks mic presence..he has raw talent though

good song though dog

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Old 01-12-04, 06:25 AM   #3
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Old 01-12-04, 12:41 PM   #4
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1st wtf........................ kill that echo.. i wanna cut it off but i wanna hear your part....... aight.... you shit was hot... i dont know whats up with that echo thing.. flow was on point.. good lyrics to.
good shit
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Old 01-12-04, 05:31 PM   #5
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First guy sounds like he's dead on the mic...really not good to hear...your flow hits QUICK ay...not my style but sounds like you on the southern shit...good verse...made the whole song..keep rhymin..pz..
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Old 01-14-04, 05:15 PM   #6
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