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you be a punck pissy ass nigga named manness/
you ass is bamness/
i should throw your ass in a dumber can/
im hot rascal blastin guns if my girl asked to/
you # 2/
im # 1/
i grab my gun/
and have tha fun/
so a fake nigga like you bedda run/
blood you scraed of a nigga like me/

W/ the vocab of first grader,
and the attitude of an asshole /
Ladys & Gentlmen
I present The Illiterate Lil Rascal /
Ive saw so many shitty rappers
I thought they couldnt get any worse,
But after seein yer Verse , Its safe to say yer
the Worst rapper on earth /
Simply the most worst
rapper i've ever heard /
N I don't wanna know your name, I don't ever wanna meet you /
Id' jus like you to know I put more energy into masturbation , then I did to defeat u
...........Yeh get the votes posted

W/ the vocab of first grader,
and the attitude of an asshole /
Ladys & Gentlmen
I present The Illiterate Lil Rascal /
Ive saw so many shitty rappers
I thought they couldnt get any worse,
But after seein yer Verse , Its safe to say yer
the Worst rapper on earth /
Simply the most worst
rapper i've ever heard /
N I don't wanna know your name,
I don't ever wanna meet you /
Id' jus like you to know I put more energy into masturbation ,
Then I put into defeat you /

Umm... again.. both were wack.. sort the structures out for sure...
Rascal's was basic really.. nothing stood out.. no decent punches.. baby shit...
MM came a little harder.. some okay disses... again, nothing stood out, but it was a much better verse overall...

Vote - Michael Madness

i think both rhymes need flow more punches better personals
MM had better words he did not sound like a 1st grader but you should have rhymed better w/ that one

Punches-MM
rhymes-rascal- still needs work
personals-none
worth reading- neither needs way more work
overall MM took over way more words has some complex word play
If i could vote it be MM

Lookin for some poll votes cmon yall..............

Both rhymes were very very poor. Very poor indeed.
Where do I start? I goota say who was better than who? That's like saying "What's better? Drinking p!ss or eating sh!t?"
Punches: MM, but only by virtue of the fact that the cat was wackness personified.
Rhymes: MM, for the same reason (but don't start thinking you're good or anything!)
Personals: I was personally offended by the misuse of the word 'rapper' in reference to EITHER of you
Overall: For being slightly less wack - MM

Both of you call the Wack Rhyme Helpline... although I think you two are both to far gone for help....

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"Strong Lyrics, Never Die Like Gimmicks; Once You've Got the Dope Rhymes Then The Sky's The Limit"

Mike got this.. yo mike.. look at the battles in the Leagues
like The LLL or sum shit. Work on ya punches dawg.

v/ MichaelMadness

win

Need 2 more polls, please vote so I can get my first win.............................

Please Just 2 More Votes , Someone Please Vote, I Need This First Win

Cmo Yall please just b more votes, 2 more and I have my first win, please gime drop these other 2 votes