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01-13-04, 02:36 PM | #1 | |
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Doze Vs Diverse
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No D/R votes.. No hate votes.. No crew votes.. All votes explained.. 3-0 KO or 1st to 5 Post your verse up in this hour.. I accepted this battle like 20 mins ago..this is not prewritten.. __________________________________________________ _ This boy’s having a feather living from his wilted scriptures, I’m a clever villain with diverse ways to break into dull losers/ Fuck this cunt, you’re a pussy boy only gaining dick riding victories, Like dicks you spunk reproduced shit, fuck it ima give you a vasectomy Diverse you don’t have funk, that’s why we see you type like junk, You’ve just been busted punk, like wrecked ships I leave you sunk/ You’re a wack package on a poised mission, your just fucking luck, See, I’m munching on this boys position, dude your crunching up/ Its like this kids a roll over, cause currently hes not even winning, Bitch I’m an ill mover, don’t you understand your never killing/ UK writers will understand my last bar better…I cant be bothered to explain it… Peace… |
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01-13-04, 02:58 PM | #2 |
Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
i got this kid like cingular phones cuz in minutes he'll just roll over
de-construct his entire verse to rubble like my words a bull dozer but fuck Doze, like his name implies he's got me feeling narcoleptic couldn't drop a clean verse if you doused your computer w/antiseptic he has to flat out post that he did not pre-write any of his verse that way he has an excuse for loss when things turn for the worse doze accepted my callout in seconds, yes, i could be his claim to fame basically i'm the equivalent of the tabloids, watch me put his name to shame his own closer was so confusing that it even caused Doze to strain his brain just like the rest of his bewildering verse, he can't be bothered to explain
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01-13-04, 03:02 PM | #3 |
BANNED
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IP: 31C1 CDF2
fuck you
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01-13-04, 03:05 PM | #4 |
Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
wtf bitch....you polled with no vote and your freeposting, fuck you get outta here...
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01-13-04, 03:23 PM | #5 |
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
uppin for some real votes instead of little bitches talkig and being fuckin annoying
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01-13-04, 03:28 PM | #6 |
BANNED
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IP: 31C1 CDF2
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01-13-04, 03:39 PM | #7 |
Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
i can say the same thing with way less words, time and effort...FUCK YOU
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01-13-04, 04:09 PM | #8 |
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
uppin for some votes 1x....
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01-13-04, 04:32 PM | #9 | |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Casualty whats the point??uppin #1
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01-13-04, 04:39 PM | #10 | |
The Moderatin Pooch
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dose=shit was alrite nice vocab but the punches weren't like hot they were aite but like in this battle they just seemed to scratch diverse
diverse=i liked the bulldozer line ur structure was trashy cause to stretched out but u had better flow and the punches were nice and they keep being more consistent throughout the whole time and casualty?? let me see u do that 1 more time and i will make sure sometin happens son i'm not playin vote=div |
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01-13-04, 04:42 PM | #11 | |
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yo diverse took this lmao opener had me rollin like Cingular! lmao...
anyway diverse had harder hittin punches n his shit rhymed.... just to tell u Doze killing and winning doesnt rhyme just cauz it has ing on the end... sorry kid learn strcuture n rhyme scheme.... my-VOte Diverse.... hit up this battle... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106389 wit honest votes... Pz... |
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01-14-04, 03:13 PM | #12 |
Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
uppin this shit as well...honest votes only please...don't let this shit get slept on....
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01-14-04, 03:16 PM | #13 | |
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IP: BF64 7642
i was feelin diverse in this one sorry whats his face diverses verse was to my likin
plus you last line? were in america
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01-14-04, 03:20 PM | #14 |
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Originality - Diverse.. less played concepts
Punches - Diverse.. flow held the punches together nicely.. harder hittin Personals - Diverse.. clever name flips Flow - see Punches ^^ VoTe = Diverse Ran away wiv this one.. now go vote on this plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...203#post1088203 ...1
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01-14-04, 03:29 PM | #15 | |
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IP: FF89 3C60
Diverse ripped this with much harder punches and much better wordplay...
That "cingular" opener was a great start. Nothing very inventive from Doze's verse. A decent personal with the "narcoleptic" line... And maybe the "vasectomy" line... But aside from that, eh. Diverse used nice wordplay on the opener, the "clean verse" line, and the "tabloid" one... Tight punches throughout. For better punches, wordplay, and good current personals... Diverse. Holla back... Vote here!
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