b]Deaths Embrace[/b]

by now my remedy is gone with the last drop of henesy~
pain returns and this anger is released at every enemy~
animosity has just become a part of me, as i breath this creed~
its hard to see through the blur from the blood i bleed~
so pen to pad is just the way it goes, as i express my woes~
the highs and lows, till i meet the angel of death enrobed~
in these dire situations surviving under fire with time running out~
seconds to live, last thoughts before life gives out~
eyes in search of heaven a perfect place to rest~
a palace of hope and love that hinges on gods blessed breath~

so take a step back with me, seconds, minutes, hours and days~
before the i pulled the trigger and left this world of hate~
i wandered like a lost soul with nothing to live for~
too afraid to escape from my haven but looking to find more~
lives of dreams that everyone else seemed to be leading~
while i was trapped in a endless hell that neva stopped repeating~
what was i to do, where could i go to find some peace~
i was looking for love but theres no place for a man like me~
here in this trecherous world with haters and cold hearts~
no friends, backstabbers ended a journey with no start~

now im back from the grave but wut have i learned~
died fast but remained in pain, the worst crash and burn~
all my life i hated me, wanted to be someone im not~
dreamed of a life that wasn't mine and neva saw the life i got~
grass is always greener on the other side of this dangerous path~
as i wish upon a star, i kno this dream will never come to pass~
i search in vain for a heaven of love and peace, a holy sanctum~
where i can end this life of absurdity, where peeps just die at random~
but now im stuck between heaven and hell, in this ungodly place~
and i'm reminicing to those better days erased with a touch from deaths embrace~

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