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02-09-04, 07:07 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Moment Of Clarity
IP: C1DA C961
Finally got time to speak my mind…
Nigga holla at cha boi…jerzey…feel my words… I done did wut chu done, jumped tha obstacles too big Made shit possible, I been to hospitals too, kid I worked thru tha sweat n tears been a slave to pain Verses n verses of my thoughts, I gave tha game Sumptin to think about, we all crave tha same I want tha cars, crib, cash, you can save tha fame My pride can’t be swallowed, soul can’t be killed Skill can’t be beat, tha shoes can’t be filled Just cuz I’m spittin over tracks for plaques Theres no difference between us, we clutchin tha same gun Cuz we got tha same roots I’m from where u came from I ain’t gangsta or wanksta, I am who my mother raised Tha streets educated me, I’m found where tha gutter lays Shit ain’t hard to understand, the scam is planned out We takin control of this, cuz no one had they hand out So don’t holla at Jerzey like I owe you sumptin Cuz you weren’t here before dawg I know you frontin No matter wut I’m still me, guilty of bein filthy Tha one and only Jerzey, holla if ya feel me Let me get sum feedback
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~Jerzey~ As I'm Blessed with Tha best gift ~One~ Holla at cha boi |
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02-09-04, 08:34 PM | #2 | ||||
Banned: Compromised Account
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IP: 399E F0FD
I liked this shit...multiez and flow was on point...and the message you delivered was good...you keepin' it gangsta with this shit son... keep doin' ya thing dunny...the only mistake I seen was that I think you forgot a line after you said "Just cause I'm spittin' over tracks for plaques"...you ain't made a rhymin' line for that...but that shit can be fixed...peep one of my latest piecez when ya get a chance...either "Hellraiza" or "Just Me"...holla back...one...
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02-09-04, 09:02 PM | #3 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 202C A952
Yo both yo pieces that u dropped is mad nice kid... fa real... this is what you do... go view an show feedback to otha cats... an go the cyphers... post like crazy in there if u tryin to let shyt go an get attention... then get with a crew after u get some rec... work hard at it... then post a open mic once a day consistant for a while... get'em...
Caesar - On3
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~Sitting In Elevation Position~ Free Agent Just A Sick Newbie Murked - Lust Lost - None |
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