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Alias just another minor behind tha wheel till he met me –he just another Mind ta spill
I’m so ill that I WILL….pop my watch with a shot---Just to prove that I got time 2 kill

I’ll eat you like a happymeal in a fat kids hands.. blast tha steel into ya sternum and make u clap ya hands
I’ll fuckin crash ya can… with a bat.. like” Joe Pesci in Casino” cuz bitch u had ya chance

Bitch thinks just cuz he rocks a shamrock that I wont hitm like some new puss ta fuck
Got my handcocked ready blast shots just incase u get brave and decide to Push ya luck

U aint fluent in this music so why do you do it---your like Helen Keller ur blind, deaf dumb and stupid
Ur a neausance ….str8 useless like rednecks in a eatin contest when they all fuckin ……… toothless..

This kid came 2 this battle like Alicia silverstone—Str8…. Clueless--- dead with blue lips
-pop tha chrom 2 ya dome and leave ya Burryed with no stone but covered in……. tulips

sory about takin so long.............................im typin as fast as i can.....................an thinkin should be up soon...........................

you ryhmes are jokes, jus start each line with knock knock,
you aint catastrophic, even if u was electric, u'd still not shock,
i don't have to be a prophet, to predict a loss for cata-strophix,
your words worth nothing, like a poet speaking nonsense,
catastrophix only shines through, on his RB avatar,
he's gon get crashed an burned, like a james bond car,
you need a new angle, because your raps are pointless,
you would make more sense writin in invisible ointment,
my words spped up your synapse's an cause you to collapse,
an if people think your not, it means that you can really act.

ILL is not a verb....U can't ILL something

punches- (cata....he had sum....stretched but better still)
mulit's- (cata....I think he had one.....alias didnt have ne)
meti4's- (alias...more original....better creativity there)
flo- (alias....neither had much....but alias was a tad better structured)
personals- (alias.....He had a few....wasnt feelin ne of cata's)

overall- (alias.....close but he edged out the flo wich was vital....had cata not been stretched he wins this)

Got to give this battle to cata strophix for his creativity...
The structure was O.K. could use some work.. but he murdered with the punches..he came up with some crazy ass meta's and had me going in all different directions.
Alias was hot but his punches didn't reall stick till the last six bars or so..He had some real witty shit in the end of his verse...
So I guess in truth..Consistency won this battle for cata..
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damn this is a tough one...

on one hand u have cata_strophix who came with nice creativity...and dope vocab...and his rhymes were nicer..but then he had lines that just make me think 'what the fuck?'...here's an example

"I'm so ill that I WILL..."

^ you would THINK..that you'd explain what you 'will' do as the line continues..but you just put the dots and started on something new...I don't get it...lol

also your structure was all kinds of fucked up..u had excessive periods in places that made the lines look horrible...and ur flow was off...

u did have a few nice punchlines tho..I liked the line about rednecks in a eating contest...might be played tho....i've never seen it before tho...

ok on to Alias..

ur verse lacked complexity...subpar rhymes...but you made up for it with punches...."only shines through in his RB avator" was a nice line...I had to look at his avatar to understand it, but after that of course I got it...the james bond car line was gay though....

ur flow was nice...structure was nice too....

I gotta give it to catastrophix tho....he just had more nice punchlines...

vote- Catastrophix...

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this shit was close as hell

as far as flow and shit iwas feel'n alias

but cata's punches did it for me no doubt


vote:catastrophix

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yo, i know when i won an i know when i lost.............an this is one of those times i know i aint lost........................his punches were played an didnt make sense.......................................uppin

V/1liner

Punches-Edged by Cata even tho stretched
Alias had some good snappy ones tho
Flow-Alias..jus all round better
Sustainment-1..jus was wittier n kept it consistent
Metas-1-..not bad but cudda been betta..
include more wordplay
Structure-Alias...not stretched n short n snappy

Props to both nice battle....
but Cata was jus harder w/ metas mixin w/ punches
pz

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT Ma battle in Elevated pz

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dawg now u just hatin stop bein a bitch and let the vote
i aint have one played line in that bitch

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WTF they still got it backwards ..................next time read the fuckin shit and get it right

this is the REASON ALL THE ILL PEOPLE ARE LEAVING BECUZ OF THIS BULLSHIT RIGHT HERE

holla
nice verse though ALIAS