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Old 02-22-04, 07:54 PM   #1
Mc_Russie
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From: In Your Back Garden
Hero

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What comes up must come down
Hear my feet don’t touch the ground
See the world from upside down
A mighty trance without a sound
I can feel your every rage
Step aside I’ll turn the page
Braking through your crazy maze
Causing a blistering blaze
Watch me throw the night away
Before I go and save the day
Feel my strongest getting near
Heading your way so prepare to fear
I won’t even hesitate
A second left to alter fate
Tried to strike but hit too late
Left the world in a terrible state
It won’t bring me down ill chase another day
The world is at stake so I’ll fight all the way


Kinda short but i thought it was good enough to post

check this out and tell me what ya think
laterz

Russie
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Old 04-07-04, 03:35 AM   #2
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i like it but where u talkin bout you been the hero
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