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01-19-04, 07:17 PM
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Dynasty Soldiers Presents: Skillz
IP: F127 8F9A
Haiku
Bursting Volcano Rising Like My Good Skillz Finally It Bursts |
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01-19-04, 07:19 PM
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Banned: Racism
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IP: D4CC BCDF
second line is 6 not 7
overall hotness |
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01-19-04, 07:24 PM
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IP: F127 8F9A
yea I couldnt fit one more syllable
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01-19-04, 08:19 PM
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IP: 4621 6ECB
^Heh. But it's meant to be a Haiku! (Well i aint written one for years...but still..)..]
But yeah, it was good, man. For what it was, and what i represented. It was solid. Good. I say good twice, cos i felt that was inappropriate in this. Another word would've been better. Than 'good'. ..resp.. |
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01-19-04, 08:57 PM
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IP: DFE3 215B
i didnt like it. not ure fault tho, i havent read a haiku to date that ive liked. i guess its aight...i dont know exactly how to rate it...good?
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