rules as posted in last battle...sorry bout forgettin bout it...but shit happens....i'll copy ur verse and put it in here than i'll spit...holla...

i got 20 mins...

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Breth's verse:

Faggot, waiting to see you drop, but you forgot to erase your boyfriends phone number,
Annoyance, no one other than Proph, destroy you, make another name to 'pick a bone' under,
I don't even have to throw a punch at you, you are a living pun,
Ha, Proph goes to school with a wedgie, so nobody gives him one,
So kiss on my shoes, move up the leg, while I piss on your dues,
I'm sensing the truths, in this bitch, literally, he's missing his jewels,
Spitting hot shit, like I searched all words that meant fire, and had it delated,
Straight through your optic, murk you till 'death do us part', have you in a casket cremated,
You fucking dork, you lucky your here today, leave you like a foster fish, abducted orphans, (or-fins)
Tuck-in orifice, like dogs do between their legs, scared boyscout, have you go door to door, sucking at porches.

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checkin in....i'm finna drop.............................................. .................................................. ...........................................

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check it


similar to 'nas' my rhymes are 'sacred' like i was
'god's brethren'*...when my 'punches' hit you
the send you ya body two different 'directions'
ya brains 'out' and ya body the 'opposite direction
of heaven'...this kids on rb's 'most wanted'
he's got more 'gs' on his 'head' than the fuckin 'green
bay packers'...kid u could never 'follow in my footsteps'
betta watch where you 'steppin'...you'll never 'fill these shoes'
bitch, they 'too big for you'...leave you layin on da ground wit
my 'feet in ya face'...this is the 'biggest' de'feet' you seen...bitch...

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sorry it took me so long..u know school...haha its a bitch...

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PLEASE VOTE ON THIS PEOPLE>....this isn't an uppin............................................. .................................................. ............

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vote bretheren




i thought he came with more of a verse that i felt,more punches and wordplay..just a better verse..

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I guess Breth takes this one, both had good material but wack structures. Hey proph, i think you would have won but i didn't like some of your rhyming choice or that you didn't finish your ideas and the lines kept carrying on and on so it read like a long sentence. Sorry i can't vote.
Vote on this if you have the chance
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106285

uppin # 1

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I rhyme better than who rhymes better than you

you lose

uppin #2

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I rhyme better than who rhymes better than you

i think breth took this one, no hate, or d/r...... his verse just came harder i thought and thought his punches were hitting

Prop u had a nice verse but structure was a lil shakey,,,,,,,, keep elevatin

Vote Bretheren

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my rhymes heatin up the track got u meltin like an icicle
this kid aint even old enuf to drive, whats he doin thuggin on his bicycle?!

Merked: NyZ GrIncH(5-1), dUrAsTiK(5-1), mcsnypa03(5-0 DQ)

i think breth took this one, no hate, or d/r...... his verse just came harder i thought and thought his punches were hitting

Prop u had a nice verse but structure was a lil shakey,,,,,,,, keep elevatin

Vote Bretheren
if yall could drop an honest vote off on this battle id appreciate it thnx

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105641

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my rhymes heatin up the track got u meltin like an icicle
this kid aint even old enuf to drive, whats he doin thuggin on his bicycle?!

Merked: NyZ GrIncH(5-1), dUrAsTiK(5-1), mcsnypa03(5-0 DQ)