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Old 01-20-04, 09:10 PM   #1
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First Battle Verse, fake battle :P

IP: 1941 4E24

This is a "fake battle" verse? hmm.. the info behind it is.. i started writing rap to battle people.. i dun 2 other open mics in my life and this is the 3rd one.. gonna start taking better steps towards battalin.. tell me what ya think.

you say i got no punch "lines" when i write?//
your right.. i fucking draw "grids" every night//
telekinetically paint your brain with my thoughts//
refain you can not, heat up n spill the bars you got//
i'll cause the rain when its hot, displayin your not//
this game is an art so play your part n clean my image//
tackle n kill you beyond the front line of scrimmage//
your girl gives me rimmage, bitch got deep a mouth//
only way you speak is if you use slant rhyme slang//
you can't rhyme man, all the shit n garbage you flow//
is what i through out the window when the wind blows//
your flows go hittin every last man from here to Afgah//
you'll catch my back-hand when i blast fans//
I spit "rough" play but always landing in the "fairway"//
You tell me to practice fair play but i take over ya air waves//
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Old 01-21-04, 06:32 AM   #2
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Uppin.. come on peeps.
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Old 01-21-04, 07:31 AM   #3
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Well done for the 1st battle verse!
Are you the same defcon on mine and tokens site?
if so then cool, if not then cool 2....

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Old 01-21-04, 12:59 PM   #4
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nope.. not the same defcon.. didn;t know there was one lol.. if he posts here then i could change my name no problem..

anyway.. thanx.. uppin again/
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