alright well i didn't establish any rules in the other thread, so

10-16 lines
no crew
hate
dr
all that other shit
and check in
and i don't know we'll do something about who's dropping their verse first

check
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just make it a blind
1 hour

alright I'd be really fake if i were to say "check it" right now so just listen, er.... read.
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Bring out an arsenal never seen before to be a crazy clown slayer//
Man what are you a crazed killer clown or a dope basketball player//
Ironically I'm the one that's got you runnin' from the beast of killers//
I'm young, but you couldn't rape me like you was the original thriller//
Findin' strength to tear down a ground level person must be a mission//
Impossible as it is, you could come up with a verse short of circumcision//
Your avi puts you out as a clown on a sunday stroll in his jump suit//
An apple a day keeps a loss away, but today your savior ain't fruit//
Things aren't lookin' up but now down is an insanely difficult task//
I dropped u so quick, you're confused how you got here, need we ask//
Questions are answered as i plumit you toward the source of darkness//
You're past hell and six feet under, and god is now on long distance//
The clown will mature to know not to be so courious and anixious//
A jury of at least five will determine your fate, I'm your only witness//
Off with his head, chopped him up with some bars, now you're gone//
Like the wind I missed your presence, your dark night's over, here's dawn//

eh whatever I'm done

What up Amp,Are you literally gay,Are you Richard Simmons?
WTF is up with yer Sig & Avy,Fruitier than Yellow in Lemons
Sig says,"come back Ally""come back Ally's sister" OMFG
Come back Aight but in my Valley,Killed easily 2 hits 2 Bod
Tryna sport Bass but has the wrong type of watts & Amp
Roles down the block bumbing Britany Spears,jumps like Tramp
Formally of the 920 currently of the 321,STFU LOL yer Dumb
No 1 would care if U were from the 187,so clap yer head on a Drum
8 wins But 15 loses,Oh wait I mean 16,Whacker than Green Beans
Age 14 friends call him MC cococut,Whacker than String Cheese

OMFG=oh my fuckin god
LOL=laugh out loud
WTF=what the fuck
STFU=shut the fuck up
check his profile for the MC cococut

hahaha

damn after this battle i'm gunna have to change that cuz noones called me that for like a damn year, now it's Jay since my name gives people difficulties

It, nice battle

This wasnt a badd battle kinds felt both ya verse.

First off ID LIKE TO BATTLE BOTH OF U SAME RULES AS HERE ILL DROP FIRST
U SET IT UP BOTH OF U..
second i thought AMp took this battle
his bars werent as wak as your it..he had wordplay sum were strecthed tho..
but i liked ya punches u had more then it..but it sum ya lines were wak..an ya wts stfu L Ol lmao things were gay..barley an personals besides ya closser//

but besides that good shit..

Vote- Amp
Can U Both hit this up..Honestly like i did..Plz...dawgs...thanks pc
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108047

nice battle but it had better punches
vote= it
check out my votes please reall vs. tilleyedie and others

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108047

If u all can drop a honest vote in there it wud be kind of u.....................

^ you could vote on the el battle-o

how's my spanglaish? did i get the accent right? I knew i should of paid attention in class!.....

uppin1
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uppin1

vote now people lets get some polls on this

im gonna say it took this......amp's verse was stretched and that took away from your flow.....both had consistant punches but it just hit harder....both there personals were good but again it's were better....his strucutre is another win here....overall he just came at amp harder..even with a shorter verse.....vocab and complexity go to amp....but just not enuff to overcome it
v-it

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