10-15

Is that 10-15 lines or should i reply within 10-15 minutes. wtf????
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ten to fifteen line man, u know what the hell i'm talkin about, just spit ur shit and let me spit mines and then u will see that u had no chance from the start, so let's get it on

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ok wise guy i see u like to take ur time, the size of my dick is what i carry on my waste umm let's see that's a 9---i see u like to battle it ain't hard to tell, but fuck with me, i'll get in that ass like a fag in jail----yeah i'm ruthless, i like gettinn head from ur moms because she's toothless.....ahh yeah the best---as a matter of fact u bore me, i got ur sister talkin bout she adore me, and i don't even know her----yeah it's over, i assumed that b4 we started, this victory was mine for the taking because i have that rappers anointing----i ain't even heard u rap yet, but thoughts of sex keep me horny,as for u frito lays is hiring because ur oh so corny---so think b4 u challenge me, if i were an orange u still would not appeal to me, this isn't even my tightest and i already have u with rubbery knees---nucca please get ur weight up, b4 u challenge the man, cause i plays no games at all call me juve u understand

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(First question that popped in my head)
Whether dan is a man, or that's just what he said?/
i know it's just a LIE so i'll shoot him until he's dead/
Murder this faggot while "IT" is sleeping in "IT's" bed/
So nuff said... i'll just give this old fag "IT's" month's pension/
So "IT" can live with "IT's" kind in "Fag's Mansion/
He's no rapper he's crazed like Marlyn Manson/
That's where he got his name Da_Fag_DAN_SON/

[switch_style]
I'm the genie in this "Battle" to grant your three wishes/
(first): i'll slash you balls and penis, to look like a girl's clitoris/
(Second): i'll send you old table covers so you could cut and press/
turn into your new dress that you can use to impress/
(third): I'll call [beyond pissed] with his friend [no abuse]/
so you can have two little boys for you to choose/

[da murder]
Playing Games is Over, it's the time for Take-Over/
The coup-de-etat attempt by the Bloody Murder/
Shooting fag like a thug in a grand gender-cide/
Leave this Pest-i-cide with no option but sui-cide/
Burn you down till you suffocated after you're smokez/
Cremated to ashes for being a faggot and hoax/
So bookmark this webpage as your new tombstone/
While i write the word's RIP, Rest-in Pieces/
There's nothin left on you, not even bits-and-pieces/
until The only things left is smelly shits-and-feces/

RIP

As i said. Rest in feces. that's a fucking curse.


i can't believe i wasted my good verse on you

BEACH. oh, i mean VITCH

Sorry bout that! i exceeded 15 lines! damn, i was thinking 15 bars. sorry bout that. just forget the last part y'all.

first 2 parts is already 14 lines. so that's just it.


upin this for votes.

com on man i killed u in less bars all that talk and sayin nothing, can we get some votes please, as a matter of fact i typed that with one had i was smoking a cigarette, u did all that talk and said nothing, by the way, that gay shit is old, ol sock chewing ass nucca, tally the votes please

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quote:

i'll get in that ass like a fag in jail----yeah i'm ruthless

-dan_da_man-

read your own verse dumbass.

THAT WAS A METAPHOR BOI, U MAKE IT SEEM AS IF I'M GAY OR SOME SHIT, THERE IS A DIFFERENCE, BOI, COME ON FUCK WITH ME, COM ON YA'LL TALLY THE VOTES

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kings overview

flow- dan
punches- bloody
personals- dan
structure- dan
creativity- dan
multis- ???

vote: Dan_Da-Man

could u honestly hit up these ones plz...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...49&pagenumber=2

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105273

yo i voted u need to drop ur verse now...or im goign to get u dqed for checking in and not posting ur verse....u wanna battle then do it in 5 mins now..or i will post the link of our battle to the mods for you checking in and leaving the battle

oops i didnt...................heres the breakdown

flow:bloody....dans
Structure:bloody,,,,dans shit was majorly fucked up
punches:dan....better stuff....
Personals:dan....Ok stuff...
multis:dan...not a lot
overall:dan....cuz of punches.....and personals got this shit

bloody had to much shit to read...make it simple and stick to one text style.

flow-dan da
personals-dan da
complexity-dan da
punches-dan da
multies-tie....werent any


bloodymurder is a rookie, what you need kid is a flow and steady pace cause your style is wack. I read it and nothing rhymed or had rhythem and that the base to rapping. practise da

I see you wrote 3 styles right but while reading you cant get anyone of your verses in a rythem a smig of a bit.
OVERALL=DAN da