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E-yo, son, when you called me out I felt kinda sad//
Cause what i'm gonna do to you is gonna drive ya mad.//
Cause now it's time for the Typo to steal this show//
I'm gonna merk ya hoe, just want to let ya know.//
It's a shame, you're Penskills but you got no skills to your name//
That crap you spit is s**t, need some style in your game.//
I'm on another plane of existence, you can't reach me//
Don't try and teach me, just go home and bang that banshee.//
Oh that's your mommy? Damn! Oh well at least that explains things.//
In this game son you're Gollum and I'm the Lord of the Rings//
That's right, lead your master to the to the Mountain of Doom//
Where you're goona get crapped on, I hope there's room.//
Don't even bother tryin', don't put your brain through the strain//
Sorry, my little friend, it's time to hop off my lyrical steam train.//

This bitch is obsessed with me,He’ll be depressed over the net and he begs for attention
Like cat’s in wheelchairs he’s legging contention.
Tomahawk ya dome, I’m well rounded like I’m obsessed with axis
Don’t want beef… I'll bury the hatchet deep till you digesting axes
Faggot, I’ll dull your point of view
Even if it’s a one rounder you’ll be lucky to make it half way through
I’ll watch this dog catch shots like vets searchin for rabies
I got him exercising on flower beds… He’s pushing up daisy’s
My credit’s not even due here. There’s no pride in destroying a true queer
The only time he was full of AW was when he drank a tank full of root beer
His whole verse was a filler, combatin with a killer
He couldn’t top me if he had more tri’s then Reggie Miller
With this diction he’ll fold, I’m crumpling him like tissues from a six year old
Wait for the votes… You’ll get more negatives then picture rolls

Vote Penskills.

Penskills came with harder punches..thats bout it...typo didn't really throw any just basically said watch out. nothing really more to say...

Vote: penskills

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lmao....
obvious desision here.....penskills came with much harder punches.....typo u need to learn how to throw a decent punch consistantly.....both had good flow...and metas were nice overall pen just killed it.
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Yo, here's my insights...

Wasn't really a close battle in my mind. Typo, need to elevate alot. I see what u were trying to do but that doesn't run here. Check out some other battles on the site, u need alot of punches and be creative with wordplay. Penskills, real nice verse, I was really feelin it. Keep it up. Nice punches, creative, wordplay all there.

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penskills took this battle simply for way better punches....they were hard and right on the spot.....
typo- your verse waz alrite too....but i wasnt feelin ya punches as hard as penskills..elevate...
heres the breakdown:
punchesenskills
flow: penskills
structure: typ....but work on ur flow man....
vote: penskills......nice verse man....
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hey this battle was one sided.. typo had a lot of basic shit.. that line bout your mom was played the fuck out.. plus you didnt really have any punchlines that stood out
you could have had alot better punchlines and wordplay.. your verse gets a 4.5/10

penskills- you came kind of soft through most of your verse.. however you had 2 punchlines that took this battle
this line "My credit’s not even due here. There’s no pride in destroying a true queer
The only time he was full of AW was when he drank a tank full of root beer "

and this line "Wait for the votes… You’ll get more negatives then picture rolls"

were the most creative and hard hitting disses of both verses .. nice shit

now please hit this battle up with a vote






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