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Old 01-19-04, 09:20 PM   #1
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Beantown

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Beantown best of the best bitch/
dont step without a vest to ya chest bitch/
act hard i turn ya softer than jello/
put holes in you and turn ya insides yellow/
(hello) i dont wanna talk bitch hell no/
ill turn ya shirt red like tickle me elmo/
sit and ill think/
yall faggots spit rhymes they tickle me pink/
then i 'clap back' like ja cus ill murder in ink/
izz cause harm cus even the nice get miked/
i leave bitches fallin like a prom were the punch is spiked/
and run ya shoes if i like/ ya nikes/
its clear you aint a bad dude/
so dont put me in a bad mood/
ill leave you eatin ya food through a clear tube/
fuck what ya heard, fuck what ya saw/
my fists hits a bitchs jaw/
harder than ty law/
leave it hard for you to talk/
make it so you cant even walk/
so how you gonna be runnin ya blocks/
ill shot two holes in ya feet and leave you wit 2 "red soxs"/ haha

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Old 01-19-04, 10:50 PM   #2
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thats was horrible......the worste performance ever......

but boston kicks ass......2 bad this open mic' didn'd..
2/10
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Old 01-19-04, 10:56 PM   #3
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thats was horrible......the worste performance ever......

but boston kicks ass......2 bad this open mic' didn'd..
2/10

agree'd....
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Old 01-20-04, 03:45 PM   #4
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^ Leave Better Feedback.

This wasnt all that good.....structure could be touched up a bit though, try keeping your lines around the same length so it helps the structure and helps the flow out in the piece....probably should work on some better content.....try adding some more multies to it...but keep at it.
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Old 01-20-04, 03:54 PM   #5
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i dont mean to be bustin ya balls, but i agree this wasnt a good drop... choppy all thru... the content jus wasnt up to par... need to work on ya scheme too... its basic at the minute.... keep working on it.... return the favour.....
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Old 01-20-04, 04:07 PM   #6
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