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Old 01-22-04, 10:44 AM   #1
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What We Don't See

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Its 2 years of non stop heat bag's bringin me down,
But its not like gettin pulled over wit seventy pounds,
Thats why I keep dealin thinking Im invinsible,
Trippy dreams of me drinking with my principal,
And he's an ex cop, so what does this mean,
Officers go for my pot like a bloodlusting fiend,
I never saw it coming, but I didnt know about the rats,
Pigs Suck Dick Im thinking as I fucking shout out the facts,
But mufucka's be pissed, came lookin for coc n missed,
Cop must be wack thinkin im scared of his provokin-lisp,
Laughed when I showed them lyrics to my sample song,
Mothafucka's just wait cause soon you'll be trampled on,
Cause Im laughin now, the big bust came out wit a quarter-O,
Now the reason for me bein here is if you can afford-yur-blow,
Charged for possesion when I've been sellin pounds,
Explainin to the cops is like crying then tellin clowns,
Now the bitches got it in fa me, laughin wit no sympathy,
And to all those who oppose me become a victom of infamy,

All those fuckin rats out there in the world, you unsolid motherfuckers, can lick my fuckin ass. You'll get whats comin too you eventually. All of you will get a fucking beating that only rats deserve. Get the fuck outta my world and go play hide and seek with your geeky friends. You'll become some nerdy fuckin executive makin the big bucks. Thats all I wanna do, but If I keep gettin busted thats gone be impossible. Im in a world of shit right now, I got the cops on me, even though they took all my money and weed the first time. and my 1.5 of coc that i was intending to sell. and that was money I owed too some pretty big fuckin people. Piggy's you can all suck my dick, go stop a murder from happenin, dont stop us from having a good time. Shit.
Pz out.
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Old 01-22-04, 11:38 AM   #2
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thought ya had a good use of multis, but ya dont need to go overboard... in some places the flow was knocked by not carrying the rhyme much, and some of it was quite basic,,,, but the vocab was ok, could be improved a bit to add to the drop.... but as it is not bad... ok concept to it... drifted a bit..... return the favour
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