I called out, he answered...

This is a rematch, he won last time out.

10 ta 12 lines...

Due asap...

Good luck.

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The verses are due ASAP ... so let me give the voters a head start ....
Decapitate you get a couple votes & then rip out your heart ....
The people like violence .... not old grumpy men who stay whinin ...
So for a few more votes I eat you like lambs that needed the silence
I feel like I'm above slopes ... battlin you ...... your only sub dope
Fuck polls I tug ropes, you'll flow clean if you eat this bar of Dove soap
See that ... half a verse ... to surpass the worst ...show you paths to birth
BTK laughs at first, but when he's gotta murder himself is where at last it hurts
You've got so many losses that the wins dont even matter any more
I leave your body parts ripped apart different places scattered from War

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Him...

Birthday: October 31
Age: 900
Crew: n/a
Biography: n/a
Location: Cloud 420
Show Battle Records: Yes

Technician scared me, kid looks like he was born on Halloween...
Then I checked his profile, no wonder this became an ugly scene!
Cuz he was, or at least claims to be, maybe he wants ta be gothic...
But they're already depressed enough, so gothics are sayin stop it!
I'm not used ta dealing with stalkers, so Tech's givin me tha creeps...
Kid's tryin so hard ta be like Born, he's even sayin he's older than me.
He prefers cold winters, on account of his brain being so whack...
Cuz everytime he's faced with a heat wave, Tech always waves back.
Gotta mention he's a wimp, joined a snychronized swimming crew...
But when one of his boys drowned, he thought he should too.
Kid gets harrassed sexually at work, his emotions are getting toyed...
Cept he can't sue anyone over it, cuz his dumbass is self-employed.

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HA! Born you had me laughin out loud at work....

Technician - WHOA on the multi's... and I mean whoa as in slow down cowboy. You have an OK style, but you're so focused on the multi's that you didn't punch well. You had maybe one punch really... and no personals. You need to elevate before taking on someone as experienced as Born. You have potential, and are better than a lot of herbs on this site, but you def need work.

Born - Seen better from you, but hilarious none the less. The heat wave/wave back punch had me laughin... Closer was decent too. Well-rounded verse, had personals, wordplay, was witty and a good read. Really you're too advanced for Tech but you took this so

vote = Born

pz yall

Vote = B2K.

Spitacular hit this pretty much on the head with his vote. Tech... lay off the multis. I've seen this a lot. Mutlis don't win battles... punches do. You have decent punches, but they're overwhelmed by the multi-use. Born. You've elevated. You had some witty punches. The wave back line was decent... but the one that got me was the self-employed. Creative way to say he plays with himself. That took it.

Vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108919

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Yea, you know we cool Tech, but I gotta be honest and say Born did take this one.

"I'm not used ta dealing with stalkers, so Tech's givin me tha creeps...
Kid's tryin so hard ta be like Born, he's even sayin he's older than me.
He prefers cold winters, on account of his brain being so whack...
Cuz everytime he's faced with a heat wave, Tech always waves back.

LOL. Havent seen Born come funny before, but I guess he became humorous. Anyway, I just thought Born had better punches and personals. Tech took the multi's, but they were... overused.
Only line I could say I thought was anything great from you Tech was "I feel like I'm above slopes ... battlin you ...... your only sub dope", and that wasn't all that great either.
I've seen both of you drop a lot better and expect more next time.

But anyway, vote Born.

And since someone erased my other post, could you drop an honest one for my battle with Mynd in elevated, or with Feebs in elite. Greatly appreciated.

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The verses are due ASAP ... so let me give the voters a head start ....
Decapitate you get a couple votes & then rip out your heart ....
meh...filler...no punch...3/10

The people like violence .... not old grumpy men who stay whinin ...
So for a few more votes I eat you like lambs that needed the silence
blah..3/10

I feel like I'm above slopes ... battlin you ...... your only sub dope
Fuck polls I tug ropes, you'll flow clean if you eat this bar of Dove soap
didnt like this....3/10

See that ... half a verse ... to surpass the worst ...show you paths to birth
BTK laughs at first, but when he's gotta murder himself is where at last it hurts
nope..tried to hard wit multies..yup...3/10

You've got so many losses that the wins dont even matter any more
I leave your body parts ripped apart different places scattered from War
whats with the violent nonsense...3/10

overall for technician...15/50.......30%



Technician scared me, kid looks like he was born on Halloween...
Then I checked his profile, no wonder this became an ugly scene!
decent personal......5/10

Cuz he was, or at least claims to be, maybe he wants ta be gothic...
But they're already depressed enough, so gothics are sayin stop it!
nah...no good...2/10

I'm not used ta dealing with stalkers, so Tech's givin me tha creeps...
Kid's tryin so hard ta be like Born, he's even sayin he's older than me.
lol...i liked this one...7/10

He prefers cold winters, on account of his brain being so whack...
Cuz everytime he's faced with a heat wave, Tech always waves back.
lmao!!!!...this is dope...9/10

Gotta mention he's a wimp, joined a snychronized swimming crew...
But when one of his boys drowned, he thought he should too.
meh...4/10

Kid gets harrassed sexually at work, his emotions are getting toyed...
Cept he can't sue anyone over it, cuz his dumbass is self-employed.
good shit...liked this....8/10

overall for Born to Kill....35/60....no need for % cuz this is better than Tech's
vote-B2k



drop honest vote right chea please:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109739

The verses are due ASAP ... so let me give the voters a head start ....
Decapitate you get a couple votes & then rip out your heart ....
the head start kind played, but it was aight
The people like violence .... not old grumpy men who stay whinin ...
So for a few more votes I eat you like lambs that needed the silence
nope
I feel like I'm above slopes ... battlin you ...... your only sub dope
Fuck polls I tug ropes, you'll flow clean if you eat this bar of Dove soap
nope...I've heard and read bar/soap lines much iller
See that ... half a verse ... to surpass the worst ...show you paths to birth
BTK laughs at first, but when he's gotta murder himself is where at last it hurts
multis were aight, but besides that, it was blah
You've got so many losses that the wins dont even matter any more
I leave your body parts ripped apart different places scattered from War
lmao at the first line...that should have been the closer cause your last like was wack

The line befor the closer was ill, the rest was either not good or played or both

Technician scared me, kid looks like he was born on Halloween...
Then I checked his profile, no wonder this became an ugly scene!
ok
Cuz he was, or at least claims to be, maybe he wants ta be gothic...
But they're already depressed enough, so gothics are sayin stop it!
nah
I'm not used ta dealing with stalkers, so Tech's givin me tha creeps...
Kid's tryin so hard ta be like Born, he's even sayin he's older than me.
nope
He prefers cold winters, on account of his brain being so whack...
Cuz everytime he's faced with a heat wave, Tech always waves back.
lol, that was funny
Gotta mention he's a wimp, joined a snychronized swimming crew...
But when one of his boys drowned, he thought he should too.
ok
Kid gets harrassed sexually at work, his emotions are getting toyed...
Cept he can't sue anyone over it, cuz his dumbass is self-employed.
Lmao!...this was an ill closer

your verse had a few ok punched and a couple funny ones. It was a pretty decent verse

Vote: Born 2 Kill, for better punches and more creativity

Return the favor here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=110153&page=1

-W1

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