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Old 01-22-04, 10:54 PM   #1
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Smokin' On A Friday feat. Ric1 and Southern Intelligence

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Old 01-23-04, 01:32 AM   #2
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yO.. Here's The Deal Duke.. Ya Quality Iight, This Beat Is Nasty Though Definately Feelin This Shit.. 1st Verse Was Iight Nothin Great Ya Flow Needs Some Work But Thats Why U Hear.. 2nd Verse Some Country South Shit.. This Verse Shined On This Track Definately.. This Hook Needs To Take Out The Echo Or Wuteva That Is Cause It Makin This Shit Annoying.. 3rd Verse Needs To Work On His Flow 2.. But Shits SKr8.. Got Off Beat In A Spot Or 2.. But Keep Elevatin.. FLOW -n- PROUNCING SHIT.. The Shit That Needs Most Work... EaZZy.. -1-..






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Old 01-23-04, 08:59 AM   #3
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beat is coo... nice vibe.... lyrics is coo too... flow could be better @ times, but you holdin' it down... hook is fucked, ok lyrically but quality is BAD... 2nd cat is coo, i like his style, lyrics is 'bout the same level as 1st guy... flow is better fo-real... 3rd guy has a really bad flow, he off beat alot, lyrics is ok.. i uno.. tha's it
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