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01-23-04, 07:12 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Fall of the Gods
IP: 45AA 6BE9
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LUKE I spit the wrath of God clashin wit Allah then imma lash back at ya'll Spit Koran sometimes horrid but i'm not preachin la illaha il Allah il Allah I'm Zues battlin Judah that much war and eternal fiyahs I'm not baptized, I'm a messiah, I gots kats sayin wa laa na'budu illa iyyah Or praise the lord, i'm wishin for war, destroy Saigon Witness Jehovahs murder then you see me slay pagans Every species can see me, fer real i make priests bleed Extinguish Pheonix's fire just for street greed Don't complain when you see these words, i spit too I bear more arms then the Idian God Vishnu Sure when I kill ya we all gon miss ya Fer real tho, imma take the throne, i ain't no Krishna I'm on another level, why I think I flaunt me I don't care bout visions, i slaughter Gandhi See the sun rise with one eye With the second eye I watch you guys die And the third, I see your fears and loves, I see inside I got heaven in flames, people diein I don’t suffer for the weak, I leave Jesus cryin I’ll be the first one to say it, hail Hitler, and break niggaz I’ll blaze scriptures and slay Christians Today’s victims are yesterdays witches burned on crosses Watch the forces come stampeding on a thousand horses The smell is morbid, a stench of death in corpses It’s Luke enforcing, shooting Mormons producing swarms of Flies to feast on the flesh of the deceased… Peace is violence; violence is the norm, a brutal storm Loosing arms, abused in fog, people accusing god Give a fuck about a Jew, mothafuck a Muslim They all can get it, damn right I said it, Luke’s a hoodlum Cant afford to give a damn, I’m not a man, a legend A legend in the making, a god to Satan, a god to heaven Drinking the blood of any thug in my way Crucify you at the stake then light the eternal flames Never before have you seen an emcee from the damned Who scorches all things when he breathes on the land |
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01-24-04, 11:05 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 4CEF 0D91
One thing for sure...you have a lot of different races and religions after you if some of them heard this...unusual topic might be a bit too much for some but other than that it had a good flow and nice sentences
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01-24-04, 11:06 AM | #3 | ||||
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IP: C1DA C961
..This was okay..lot of stuff seemed forced..good topic though..
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01-24-04, 11:42 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: DD10 0DFF
Yeah this was alright here.....structure in this was alright.....the flow in the piece seemed alright in both verses, some spots it kinda got off for me but it was still good....you had some alright vocab in there....topic was good i thought....overall alright piece...keep at it.
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