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Old 01-23-04, 07:12 AM   #1
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Fall of the Gods

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JAE
LUKE


I spit the wrath of God clashin wit Allah then imma lash back at ya'll
Spit Koran sometimes horrid but i'm not preachin la illaha il Allah il Allah
I'm Zues battlin Judah that much war and eternal fiyahs
I'm not baptized, I'm a messiah, I gots kats sayin wa laa na'budu illa iyyah
Or praise the lord, i'm wishin for war, destroy Saigon
Witness Jehovahs murder then you see me slay pagans
Every species can see me, fer real i make priests bleed
Extinguish Pheonix's fire just for street greed
Don't complain when you see these words, i spit too
I bear more arms then the Idian God Vishnu
Sure when I kill ya we all gon miss ya
Fer real tho, imma take the throne, i ain't no Krishna
I'm on another level, why I think I flaunt me
I don't care bout visions, i slaughter Gandhi
See the sun rise with one eye
With the second eye I watch you guys die
And the third, I see your fears and loves, I see inside
I got heaven in flames, people diein
I don’t suffer for the weak, I leave Jesus cryin



I’ll be the first one to say it, hail Hitler, and break niggaz
I’ll blaze scriptures and slay Christians
Today’s victims are yesterdays witches burned on crosses
Watch the forces come stampeding on a thousand horses
The smell is morbid, a stench of death in corpses
It’s Luke enforcing, shooting Mormons producing swarms of
Flies to feast on the flesh of the deceased…
Peace is violence; violence is the norm, a brutal storm
Loosing arms, abused in fog, people accusing god
Give a fuck about a Jew, mothafuck a Muslim
They all can get it, damn right I said it, Luke’s a hoodlum
Cant afford to give a damn, I’m not a man, a legend
A legend in the making, a god to Satan, a god to heaven
Drinking the blood of any thug in my way
Crucify you at the stake then light the eternal flames
Never before have you seen an emcee from the damned
Who scorches all things when he breathes on the land
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Old 01-24-04, 11:05 AM   #2
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One thing for sure...you have a lot of different races and religions after you if some of them heard this...unusual topic might be a bit too much for some but other than that it had a good flow and nice sentences
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Old 01-24-04, 11:06 AM   #3
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..This was okay..lot of stuff seemed forced..good topic though..
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Old 01-24-04, 11:42 PM   #4
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Yeah this was alright here.....structure in this was alright.....the flow in the piece seemed alright in both verses, some spots it kinda got off for me but it was still good....you had some alright vocab in there....topic was good i thought....overall alright piece...keep at it.
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