U know the rules. Check in then ill drop!
Time Limit 20:50

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checkity checkity check fuk the time limit u can av as long as u want theres no rush

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To kick us off here's a little teaser
You better get used to it cos they don't get ne easier//

If a tree falls in the wood does it make a sound
Just cos u don't see it dont mean your mum dont get around//

Why do you call yourself MC aines
Cudn't u think of a better name aint u got no brains//

Luck at your avaiter "fuck milk get pot"
To make ur rhymes sound good u'd need a lot//

Your jaws a bit shaken from that last punch
The rhymes comin out just aint got no crunch//

Aines you called me out, the cheek
Now take this last bop on ur big fat beak!

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Just waitin 4 ur drop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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lmao ^^^herb im not even gonna cum hard

Venny ur verse is prob wack,it'll lack punches peronals and Rhymes...
This is ur 1st tutorial listen in but dont bite my lines...
Like ur avvy im merkin and sendin u on a road trip...
Voice of tha streetz is who u WANT 2 role wit...
I’m Spiting-Raw…
don’t even Start me Kid, I’ve seen you talking Hard and Shit-
like you’d blast me…but with what, your printer’s ink Cartridges...
Rhymes vision of skill is more like a Peep-Hole…your Nothing-Kid...
You’d have to stick your legs in a toilet…just to be Running-Shit...
Face the facts like your custom text....your pathetic...
If that was a joke it would be like pussy...you dont get it...
Your flow needs medication...I heard it was ill...
But ya style aint sick...its just allergic to skill...
I know for a fact your garbage...but I kinda felt ya at first...
Untill you posted this in the W.E.C..."Need help with a verse"...

uppin this shit 4 votes

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uppin number 1

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iight...

aines won this... obvioulsy... he had punches... other dude... drastically elevate... your shit... really you are... the most basic shit ive seen for a long time... if you dont like it... battle me... a wudnt mind a nice easy win... haha...

aines... you had some nice punches... a liked the opener... even tho its played... but to be honest... anythin would of beat this herb...

no hate... cuz a dont know shit about you apart from that you cant spit... elevate or fuck off man... haha

vote - aines...

pz...

OUT

yo i no i cant vote or nuthin but could you hit this battle up with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...101#post1132101
much appreciated

^^^no uppin number 2

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Ok this was a 1 sided battle
Opener: Aines
Closer: Aines
Wordplay: Aines
Flow: Aines
Punches: Aines
Final vote: Aines
Venny u got to elevate
peace.

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Strong Hold Productions!™

opener:venny
closer:aines
flow:aines( vennys was on n off)
punches:aines
enjoyment:venny
VOte:aines

2b honest not da best battle at all but aines came harder, but 4 a Newb venny ur rap was aight.

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uppin number 3

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Flow - Aines
Punches - Aines
Opener - Aines
Closer - Aines
Multis - Both pretty weak
Creativity - Aines

Overall - aines


Aines took this one for sure his puches came harder his flow was way better

and Venny you need to elevate....

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