10 lines,,, you go first
no crew votes,
no newbie votes
must have 500 posts to vote

Checkin In...I'll Drop Soon.

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Fuck'a Com got cut from Wits End..an complained for simpathy
In elite free agents..'wits end & O.I dropped you like soap 3?'
Com i read your battle with thesis..ye swayin votes like a bitch
Crying about how hes gettin dick rode and all that herbish shit
Your Wit's End is about to end say what you want diss rule
Cause your humour fell off When O.I dropped you for bein a tool
Complex this com an flex an school you in text ya fake vet
Regret bein a bitch yet and how your the only RB baby left
Regurgitated this bitch..bringin up your past tears was a must
I had to inform Rb coms an attention whore..
If he doesnt win he acts selfish..and sways for votes as a crutch

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Rule think's he'll win... but he's ten bars below par
We all know he's a bitch... all he's missing's the JA!
Your first battle in this place... and the first of your defeats
How can you plan to keep pace?... when you haven't found your feet?
Rule wants to build a rep... then puts out that fucking shambles?
No-one picks up on ya wordplay... like knives without the handles!
Cut from Wits End? when you thought of that did ya wig itch?
Read up on my history but didn't bother to read my sig bitch!
You seem uninspired... You've shown no skill, I'll show the door
Click your heels... coz "Toto...we're ain't in topicals no more"!

upping for votes..............
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Fuck'a Com got cut from Wits End..an complained for simpathy
In elite free agents..'wits end & O.I dropped you like soap 3?
^^^^^
Hmmm... to long...didnt rhyme....Hes in wits end...and dropping soap=played
4/10

Com i read your battle with thesis..ye swayin votes like a bitch
Crying about how hes gettin dick rode and all that herbish shit
^^^^^
Decent...not a very hard hitting punch
6/10

Your Wit's End is about to end say what you want diss rule
Cause your humour fell off When O.I dropped you for bein a tool
^^^^
Trying to hard fer personals....only 1 punch is needed about the crew thing
5/10

Complex this com an flex an school you in text ya fake vet
Regret bein a bitch yet and how your the only RB baby left
^^^^
wtf? an attemp at a multi? YOUR TEXT BATTLING RIGHT NOW punch was disgracefull
4/10

Regurgitated this bitch..bringin up your past tears was a must
I had to inform Rb coms an attention whore..
If he doesnt win he acts selfish..and sways for votes as a crutch
^^^^^
swaying votes twice....you put an extra line which through off the scheme
5/10

overall 4.5/10 (dont rap like rap, bat, cup, slut) and use wordplay



Rule think's he'll win... but he's ten bars below par
We all know he's a bitch... all he's missing's the JA!
^^^^'
good concept, wasnt worded right
6/10

Your first battle in this place... and the first of your defeats
How can you plan to keep pace?... when you haven't found your feet?
^^^^
OK line, try not to use the defeat/feet thing, nice flow
6.5/10

Rule wants to build a rep... then puts out that fucking shambles?
No-one picks up on ya wordplay... like knives without the handles!
^^^
pretty ill...nice metta...
7.5/10

Cut from Wits End? when you thought of that did ya wig itch?
Read up on my history but didn't bother to read my sig bitch!
^^^^
ILL...nice little flip, and punch
9/10

You seem uninspired... You've shown no skill, I'll show the door
Click your heels... coz "Toto...we're ain't in topicals no more"!
^^^
Nice....little personal...
8/10

overall 7.5/10

com wins Better verse overall

rule... thought the opener was a bit played, and it didnt really rhyme... the verse was quite personal, thats good, but the punches didnt hit too hard... th closer was ok, but didnt like the way you presented it... overall... 5/10
com... liked the opener, amusing... and quite consistent punches... with some nice wordplay

Rule wants to build a rep... then puts out that fucking shambles?
No-one picks up on ya wordplay... like knives without the handles!
^^liked this bar... and i thought ya finished it with a good strong punch...

overall coms verse was harder hitting and more amusing...vote=com

whats MY mark out of ten?? lol............................................... ..

id say rule had an overall decent verse....i liked the humor of punches and personals....good strucutre...opener could have been better, and closer was pretty decent....i'd say it lacked in metas and harder hitting punches....there was a little filler..........so i'd say 6/10

com had hard hitting punches/personals especially the openeer......your creativity was killer....your strucutre was decent as was rules.....your metas were better than his.....
so were the punches and personals....overll.............8.5/10 ~ you win
vote - com

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...pathetic...lol...if you read in elite free agents you people would understand the personal lol

but nice battle com...uppen for votes

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

thx.. but don't use personals about me bitching and then do it yourself. lmao

Com ripped this cat...

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Neeks Tha Nicest...

^^neek i ripped you fuck off fag

com i was just saying..wasnt bitching..I just thought personals win battles..but meh...and i said nice verse..so think about it

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461