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lil jon chekin in,il drop first///////////////////

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"THE FRANCHISE"

k. no d/r, hate or crew votes
No biting, recycling, or feeding

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Time Limit 5:50

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dis guy is getin old,like mike tyson,throwin week punches,
hes won as many battles as u can get free lunches,

i no my 0-3 battle record is cheep,
but like ur mun in bed,ur stlye and flo is week,

im da real deal,fuck u up like extascy pill
fuck wot u feel,dont like my flo den throw me da bill

see, ur name VennyRhymes has got u bad reputation,
u stellin my lines?coz dats wot i said on ur sign up aplucation

ill leave u punch drunk with my lyrical mirical,
my beats will burn coz there biblical clinicals

Venny rhymes anit up 2 dis game, he brought string 2 da battle to tie da score,
he hanged himself wid it now,coz he don't wonna battle me no more,

leave dis site punk, we dont wont lightweight,
vistit www.nevahadabitch.com and find ur self a date.

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"THE FRANCHISE"

To get me started just let me emphasise
How easy its gonna be to crumble your enterprise//

Many men have tried and many men have failed
By the time im finished i'll have ur nuts impaled//

Oh dear, you've realised that you're out of your depth
A better rhyme comes with every single breath//

You're like the mr. man character mr. Tickle
Cos your rhymes are so poor people just giggle n giggle//

When u realise and you look bak after
On your rappin career ive just closed the chapter//

Like a silent movie no 1 can hear u scream
With ne luck, when u wake up, u might just think this was a dream//

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Lets get the votin goin then!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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well, both were kind of wack..
venny rhimes had better wordplay, punches were both weak (excepting some venny`s)flow the same shit, and lil john take the personals (really weak, though)
elevate

vote: venny

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Dont care on wut u may think,
you`ve been bullshiting till now,
show me what you can really do

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bootleg legally, brothers

I think venny got this, got betta flow than lil Jon, some nice word play. U both got some gud punches.

Vote: Venny

Venny nice verse for ur 1st battle!
Rite Break down!
opener,Venny
closer,Venny
flow,Venny
punches,Venny
enjoyment,Venny


Vote.......................Venny

weak battle, but Venny gets it, the other cat was so illegible and illiterate that i just quit reading his shit, at first i thought it was supposed to be some kinda island accent, but damn, how annoying! Jean paul sucks, and so did you "lil john".
busted ass name too. no hate no beef, venny was better.
vote-Venny Rhymes

venny killed this overll better punches and flow. lil jon ya flow was aight the disses needed work though and spellin was atrocious still i understood wut ya was sayin and it didn't hit like venny's verse did so vote-venny