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Me Vs. Rap
IP: 2F9D AE7B
Sick but not with lines
so when you see me with a knife you know its time- Throats get slit i only torture souls in dungeon pits mad man equipped with witts taking out squads with deadly words coming out my lips from struggle to frustration its all i've been facing I'm so underground tigga wouldnt even let me in the basement- So raw my flesh alone contains hip hop's medicine it's clear and evident the flow detaches ligaments emcees left in amazement i bring horror to eyes like fat bitches on jerry springer getting naked five days outta 7 im wasted that means them two days im in the pad writting lyrics trying to make it force to hold RAP by the neck sometimes i feel im the only one giving HIP HOP RESPECT! No hating in me but you spitting that bling bling you no real emcee just a bunch of hoes on their knees giving head to industries get smacked up followed by a "bitch please" trying to attack my empire posing as a G so to the end or my death which ever comes 1st ima hunt fags in rap craving Hip Hop's Curse as soon as mainstream gives them birth then blaze'em in heaven or hell either way its gonna be worst until they scream out send me back to earth...... |
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IP: 4577 CD9A
..you had good intentions..but that was about it..your flow was weak and wordplay was garbage..peace..
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IP: 76B1 9A60
Yeah this was ok....structure needs a touch up though, some of your lines were really stretched out compared to your other lines that you had...try to shorten them down a bit though....try using some better content in future pieces....but keep at it.
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
i think you need to concentrate on flow... without that a piece dont hold... also the content needs to be interesting... ive seen this many times before... be original and add more complexity to it.... put more thought into it...... but it wasnt all bad.. some spots were ok... just it wasnt consistant...
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IP: 0AE3 F3B7
It was ok. yeah Credz was rite ur structure needs a touch up
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