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01-28-04, 03:16 PM | #1 | |
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Kilo [vs] :)
IP: A10D 4933
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drop an hour after we both check in blind spit no feeding who gives a fuk who votes, as long as it's honest and fair good luck |
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01-28-04, 03:18 PM | #2 | |
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IP: A10D 4933
checking in................................................ .........................................
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01-28-04, 03:48 PM | #3 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
aiight checkin in..................................
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01-28-04, 04:08 PM | #4 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
yo im just going to straight up leave your FEATURES RATTLED
*everyone check the link in his sig* no one wants to READ YOUR BATTLES with performances like that how are you ever going to BE DOPER your damn battle had nearly 600 views but only had 3 VOTERS (hahahaha) your overlooked bitch cuz the impression that you SEND IS SMALL plus your a dumbass wit a brain the size of a TENNIS BALL (lol) the good think for you would have been to have this battle RAP SKIPPED cuz you aint got the proper TACTICS to MATCH THIS ill have your ASS WHIPPED then have your spinal cord STRAPPED WITH a MATRESS thats filled with a million CRACKED TIPS of a desert CACTUS so just give it up and become and ACTRESS cuz kilo you cant see me in THESE VERBAL CLASHES cuz you ride so much dick your ass LEAVES PURPLE GASHES damn faggot.. the rashes on your asshole are thicker than STEVE ERKELS GLASSES
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01-28-04, 04:21 PM | #5 | |
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IP: A10D 4933
"Hi everybody!", appears like im battling Dr.Nick Riviera today
cuz this guys is dumb... ...thinks my illness would be stopped if he drank kool aid Look, This forum ain't McDonalds...It isn't now and never was This guy only loves to smile because herbs are all he does Smiles only good with the whack, so he aint worth my while and I know he wasn't worth my moms because she still has a smile With whackest and worst...his path has no Junction... he sucks so much you'd think he's rapping bout lyposuction You know how when somethings ugly...it's just hard not to stare? No wonder people vote on his battles... Your structures worse than the one that's in Iverson's hair Just like your eyes...This battle should already be closed Smiles been roc'ed so bad you'd think he has fellas on his clothes |
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01-28-04, 04:26 PM | #6 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
lol.. yo we goin up this for votes.........................
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01-28-04, 04:43 PM | #7 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
uppin again.. wow.. thanks for the votes people... gosh
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01-28-04, 04:49 PM | #8 | |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Good battle..
.. structure was slightly off but held well.. first two bars were dope.. real nice personals.. From there it seemed to go downhill slightly.. kinda played punches.. didn't really match the opener... multies were nice, but it coulda been better as a basic rhyme scheme.. A good verse overall.. Kilo.. opener wasn't in the same class, but it was okay.. Structure was tight throughout... Got better throughout really... some creative punches.. I was feelin it more in the end basically.. a better verse in my eyes.. Tight battle but.. Vote - Kilo |
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01-28-04, 04:52 PM | #9 | |
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: EED2 4F8F
takes dis battle.both had good punches but hit hard.both had good lines. took da humour side of dis battle.both good alround.
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01-28-04, 05:09 PM | #10 | |
Banned: Spammer
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IP: 4577 CD9A
i voted for smiley cuz he had a better flow and at first kilos flow was goin nowhere, also smiley had a better closer...kilo most of ur stuff didnt even rhyme,Your structures worse than the one that's in Iverson's hair
vote=smiley aka http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109267 doesnt count -feeble Last edited by Feeble Minded : 01-31-04 at 02:27 PM. |
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01-28-04, 05:13 PM | #11 | |
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IP: B20F 67F7
^ugh...upping for voters that have a brain...and that understand my structure please. Say it's bad if you want, but i've noticed a lot of peeps on the site have the same one. Espically in LLL...so just vote watever...but make it better than dat guys...
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01-28-04, 05:19 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 7733 7AF9
good battle. i really enjoyed it. Kilo you have mad elevated: nice work!
...you are getting better with your structure as well, i really like your choice of rhymes and shit...its a refreshing read after seeing so much SHIT/BITCH bullshit in FL. you really have a way with rhyming words. Im gonna have to say Kilo got this one...he came more personal...and his punches were connecting well and when i read some i thought....wow thast clever. liposuction thing was tight. same with with the iverson's hair punch. i like your verse as well but the punches didnt seem as clever. i mean your rhymes are tight but in some ways it takes away from your verse cuz its like you are focusing on the rhyme words and not the whittiness of the punch as a whole. a real life battle might of been a different story because was going off with multis. good shit. if you can rap , i think u would be good in audio or something. anyways good battle. but to me, Kilo takes it. good job guys. vote: Kilo |
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01-28-04, 05:19 PM | #13 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
shut the fuck up you swayer.. strucure has nothing to do with your verse.. and also im 14-2
uppin yo grinch poll your vote
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01-28-04, 05:19 PM | #14 | |
Banned: Biter
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IP: 029B 818C
blah go ahead and cry about this being a hate vote but its not
kilo came out strong and so did but some lines just did not make sense like for example the mattress line...what the fuck was that but kilo did have harder hiting punches and the closer was pretty good for a betetr verse and better punches.... v/kilo |
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01-28-04, 05:22 PM | #15 | |
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IP: F7FC CAA9
opener/closer- smiley
his structure, punch, and personal just outclassed kilo's flow/structure- smiley in the opener and closer kilo's structure slipped.... but smiley's flowed sickly with the cactus-matress-actress area, and the multis gave smiley the edge punches/personals- smiley kilo had some alright ones, but smiley's personals just hit alot harder... and that line about stever urkels glasses just overshadowed kilos several decent punches vote- smiley not a bad verse kilo, you might want to consider putting multis in ur verses... in text it helps alot please hit up and vote fairly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110000 |
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