Yeah, You Kno What I'm Sayin, I Ain't Really Think Love Would Be A Struggle Like This. . Like, It's Hard To Balance Shit Out And Make Sure Everything Is Kosher With One Thing And Then You Can Finally Direct Towards Another. . With This Rap Shit, I Guess I'll Always Be Lookin. . .

Lookin' For Love. . But I Seemed To Check The Wrong Places
You Can't Get Love By Quoting Song Phrases, There's Phases
First Is The Attraction, The Talks, Maybe One Night Satisfaction
Then You Start Askin The Questions To See If She Actin'
Most Girls Are. . . It Takes A While To Find Ms. Right
I Spent So Much Time Fuckin With Wrong That I Miss Right
Love Wants To Have A Fist Fight, It's Always Hard To Settle
Down N Find A Girl. . Like A Midget Reaching For The Pedal
I've Had Girls Come And Go Like They're Presence Was Embessled
I Need A Chick Who's Silouhette Is Like Some Nicorette
The Typa Chick To Take Ya Breath, Break Ya Habits N Make You Forget
I Guess I'm Really Lookin For A Problem Solver, Not A Revolver
Not A Chick That'll Blow Her Brains Out Leave, N Never Call Up
Me Again, I'm Not Askin For Perfection, Shit. .
. . Even I'm Lacking A Whole Reflection
But From My Perspective, I Just Need The Chick That Makes Me Smile
Makes Me Feel Better And Picks Me Up For A Ride Above The Weather

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I Just Want That One Chick, But I Get Surprise Hoes
Lookin' For Love, But I'm Walkin' Like Wonder With My Eyes Closed
Need Some Shit That's Permanent, My Past, I'm Burnin' It
N Startin A New Quest For Love, Tables Keep Turnin' This

Guess I Should Take Myself From Rap, Since That's My Main Focus
But I'm Super Glued To This Shit, No Time To Grab Names N Show This
Love I Hold Within, I Have To Express Through The Pen, My Emotions
Hold No Air, There's No Floatin' I'm Usually Coastin In The Booth Roasted
I Looked Left, Only Saw My Boys, Looked Right Saw The Control Panel
There Could Be Girls On The Mantle N This Work N No Play Is Hard To Handle
So I Can't Place Full Blame On The Women, As My Priorities Are Outta Wack
Rap Is The Superiority But. .
Can't A Woman Support Me So When I Turn Around She's Got My Back ?
We Gotta Cancel Each Other Out, My Career And Your Inspiration
Allows Me To Write But Still Put You Before Words With No Hesistation
And Trust, I've Used The Scope On Guns To Try N Spot That One Female
But I Ain't See Shit. . Does Anybody Care To Sell. .
A Map To The Right Chick, Fuck This Love Carosel, You Got It, Please Tell
Turntables Keep Spinning This, Nothing Turns Up, Then I Might Face Facts. .
That Nobody Can Have My Love Or Undivided Attention Like Ms. Rap. . .

[Chorus]



Yeah, I've Finally Found My Style. . I've Elevated A Helluva Lot In Just A Day, Amazing What Snow Days Can Draw Outta Ya.

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I like this drop. It seems like you have most everything down, some of your lines didn't exactly rhyme, but over all it was good. Just keep at it, keep developing your style.

Uppin, Leave Links, Pz.

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"The Typa Chick To Take Ya Breath, Break Ya Habits N Make You Forget"
This is a line that could go down as classic. I'm feeling this. Why so long though? Well it dont matter. It was worth the read. Keep posting.

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Rev 12:11 - Use your voice...

bit of a played topic, but most are so...... quite descriptive, and for most the flow was good, one oor two lines were stretched out a bit, which knocked it...... but ya had some decent wordplay in there, which kept the interest.... all in all a decent drop..... keep at em....

Hmm..Good flow...yes it is bit played out topic..but..you managed to keep it enjoyable..I like your chours..and your wordplay was also nice..keep droppin..peace..~click on my sig..~Journey~

Uppin. . Pen, I Got Your Reply To Journey. . I Had The Shit Last NIght But My Fuckin computer Froze.

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