loves a joke

ayo i think and sigh, start to wonder why love is such a lie,
comes and goes, those stupid dumb hoes like the blink of an eye.
i dont care who im offending or befriending, im jus venting frustration,
comprehending complication, cuz love is just a waste of dedication.
forget ya soap opera romance, forget ya 'love at first glance',
nothin special bout the last dance, so wake up from ya child love trance.
through the highs and low's still no body knows that 'lovers' jus be 'bluffing',
forget ya juliet and romeos, cuz they dont call them hoes for nothing...
yall feel the rejection when ya guy has a confession,
and then you finally realize the lies, cuz it aint worth the affection.
when will you retards learn, like a 'door knob' your just 'another turn',
and you waste ya money and time, only to get nothing in return.
i dont care if you agree wit me or this is somthin you dissaprove on,
love is a phase, grow some balls already and move on.

(chorus x2)
its all a lie, those 'lovers' only pretends,
lets see how your doing when it finally ends.
ayo keep rubbin ya eyes, and listen to these words spoke,
and finally realize that this 'love' is just a stupid joke.

you think ya relationships true, i look at you and its not,
cause when you take away lust, then what else do you got? (hmm?)
you got nothin, now days love is just meaningless an' stupid,
now true love is lost, like lookin at backs of milk cartons for cupid.
ha i even thought it was true, so i fell in it without delay,
then i realized true love is almost as rare as white rappers today.
hoes lack the range, flows be the same, nothin new and nothin strange,
nothin suprises me no more, aint nothin ever will change.
everythins the same, white rappers always be dissin,
lovers kissin, another hoe is in anotha kitchen.
true love subtractin attraction is nothin, i mean what can you say,
those hoes wouldnt know true love even if it wrote them a love rap on valentines day.
(haha) you both 'madly in love' but then you get dropped witout any reason,
inside jokes and nick names mean nothing...HEY! its a different season! (hahaha)
well if ya ever think true love is a joke, then just listen to this song,
forget true love...cause hoes never last that long.

(chorus x2)

now you say you the luckiest person on the world, (haha) drop the act,
im the lucky one, just look, my hearts still intact.
ya acting older than you are, when you still in ya teens,
jus look where you finding ya love, yall must have forgot what true love means.
i 'sweep ya feet' like your depending on a 'failed cane',
and stop your 'tracks' at the same time, like a 'derailed train.'
im writing these lyrics wit a 'few in mind', the ones who i thought were a 'true find',
till the confession and end of progression, who woulda known i was 'two of a kind'. (hahaha)
just a waste of time, so i sit here makin ya 'taste your own crime',
cuz the only good thing about love is motivation for another line, ideas for one last 'rhyme'.
you might wonder why im sayin this, its the hoes i 'knew of',
whateva...i lost hope in those sluts like i did 'true love'.

(chorus x1)

me:
haha love is a big waste of time...

thank god for britney spears

up it

thought this was ok.... flowed nicely for the most, one or two stretched lines, that knocked it a bit, but nuhin serious... you stayed with the topic nicely and the scheme seemed ok, you could carry the rhyming further tho... but i liked the angle you wrote from.... tho some could be worded better, but i see potential.... decent drop..... return the favour.....

This was better than your other piece i read i thought....i liked this actually....you had some nice internals in there i thought which helped the flow out a lot.....had some nice multies in there as well.....the content in this was good i thought, something i usually write about as well lol....but keep at it man.