10-15 lines
Spit with 45 minutes
sorry it took me a while to set up
I left the house

checkin in

Reese Killah aint shit, I seen him spit crap all the time in cyph
Your verses are weak, so I dun expect your battle to be tight
Jus a newb tryin ta up his post count by postin 6 lined pieces of shit
But this heres a battle, never done one befo huh? Fuckin stupid kid
I plant my rhymes that give off radiation for your growin speed..
Your herbish kid when your featured, less effective than stale weed
This kids worse than herb votes structures fucked rhymes quotes...
fuck, if i can about words not hurtin you i'm throwin sticks and stones
Bitch your jus an appetizer to me, cause i devoured you quick
Not worth my time, your jus a set up before I really get pissed
I'm slicing this kid at the legs, heart, neck, all up into tiny peices...
Cause face it dog, theres jus no wrong way for me to eat reeses...

ehh whatever, post soon

What's that smell, oh it's the verse above this
You flow worse than kidney stones in your piss
Lyric bro, your names what you lack
I probably should've warned you, I'm a lyrical gat
Like biggy smalls said I'll stab you til your gushy
Lyric gets fucked in his ass so much, it smells like a pussy
I won't sayfirst battle this is my , so you won't get embarrassed
Battlin me was a mistake, like you bein born was for your parents
Were you dissing me above, or just admitting defeat
I'll give you a dirty sanchez, tape it, name it, latino heat
I'm not named after the candy, so your last line don't stand
Your like an M&M, cept your meltin in the palm of my hand
Your remind of Oprah before Dr.Phil
A stupid ass bitch on one to many pills
You put together nice sentences to spit within the battle
I put together death sentences, and eat you like a cannible

why are words swithched around now they werent when i wrote it (7th line)
its supposed to be: "I won't say this is my first battle , so you won't get embarrassed"

ya fed off my verse bitch.....uppin 1

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RK- you had very basic punches that didnt really connect well...you didnt have any good wordplay, personals, and the only thing you had decent was flow. try to improve on ya punches cuz they are the most important part in battling. make them more complex and take a trip to Wackness Emergancy Center to get help, youll get there u just need some practice. most of ya punches were basic and played...in other words wack

lyric - you had a overall decent verse wit some good solid punches. ya wordplay was aight and you flowed very nicely. move on to more elevated people and stop battling these newbies...give em a chance to elevate. you could actually cut ya lines down a bit, they are alittle to long....it would help ya flow be better. for the most part though ya drop was good, try to add more metas though.

my vote - lyric...he simply came harder and better in most catagorys

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O.k. Solid drops...I like the Closer...Lyric...But I liked reese's as well..Tie
Opener...Lyric...Just because he put a solid punch in there.
Meta's.....Lyric..He got creative there for a minute...Reese...a lil to blunt..Be more clever.
Flow...Reese...Great style...No flaws..just played lines. Lyric...good flow but this is where you slacked.
Wordplay- Reese again...A few great patterns in there...I liked..Lyric you lacked here again
Sust...Lyric..you punched and kept swinging....Reese...you came in spurts.

Overall...Lyric....He had more substance and wittiness in his flow...and you know how much Rb Loves wit.

And........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110795
Thank you in advance for voting....

uppin #2. PLease drop an honest vote here guys and leave a link

Uppin #3. Come on yall. I vote on your battles...vote on this honestly. Quit lettin it sleep

Flow - Lyric had the better flow... His bars remained even and contained consistency throughout his verse

Wordplay - Reese Killah had some wak wordplay, but I still think his was better than lyric

Punches - Lyric had harder hitting personal punches.....

Multi - ???????

Structure - Lyric had a dominating structure that leveled Reese Killah...

I vote Lyric in this battle


Please drop honest votes here...
Battle Verses Quelude
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109584

Battle Verses Killa Kid
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109803

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Mystic (Traitor)

lyric took this one... Reese, don't ever feed of versez again, thatz wack... Reese used some played linez but still hiz stuff waz ok to read... Lyric clearly waz more experienced which also gave him victory over reese
vote - lyric
(need 2 more postz, -1 after thiz- to vote, I will come back when I have 100 posts...