same rules apply
10 line max
No feeding..
First to 5 votes wins...


...good luck...

no polls???

ok that's cool it dont bother me none...

i will be leaving to the radio station in a while so i might have to drop until
i get home from school tomaro...but if that bothers you then go ahead and
drop tomaro...there is no feeding anyway so it dont really matter

i almost forgot about this...i just finished watching a movie...this was a quick 5 minute key...

This kid's a herb, just by reading all of his verses you see..
a bunch of filler with capitalization, i think you deserve everyone an apology
Thats right, you wasted our time, everyone expected something tough,
and i'd give you some helpful tips but im afraid 10 lines just wont be enough!
Emerge formed a crew thats all about compassion and gay pride,
and 'merge decided to join two crews, because of all the dicks he could ride!
His talents a piece of trash, like a condom gone wrong..
and the only thing 'merge killed was the paper he wrote his verse on!
If every man hes been with turned straight i'd bet he'd yell out "please take my life"..
and i dont keep my punches family related because he covers that in his sex life! (meaning hes into incest)

quick key....good luck...

Edit: Hmmm, this new forum layout fucks up everyones structure, i had my structure correctly but the forum layout is too small so it fucks up peoples structure....

uppin for emerge.........
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blah....keyed


I often wonder where my wackness went that was built up inside
I deride.....
but with a sense of happiness...i found it deeply instilled in derive!
You homo. . .sex punches are a no-no damn...I thought you knew
Fuck beating you black & blue...
....ama punch you in & out every single hue!
And this foo is isn't only a biter. ..he also chews and swallows too
Laughed when he said,...
....... "Even if i was Jill I wouldn't be jack shit next to you"
You personify ceramic....shit even with this filler i got you glazed
WOW. . .your home page was dope...till you named it purple haze
You had no chance after all you still quote, edit, and explain bars
blah blah blah blah blah blah.....
^^^^considered quoteable when put next to your shit by far


yup...

eh i changed my mind i want this poll because im an herb
who cares about records........so somehow ama try to get
this polled

^LMAO... duke's honest.
-Axe

Derive....

This kid's a herb, just by reading all of his verses you see..
a bunch of filler with capitalization, i think you deserve everyone an apology
^ Filler.

Thats right, you wasted our time, everyone expected something tough,
and i'd give you some helpful tips but im afraid 10 lines just wont be enough!
^Blah Old Concept.

Emerge formed a crew thats all about compassion and gay pride,
and 'merge decided to join two crews, because of all the dicks he could ride!
Garbage.

His talents a piece of trash, like a condom gone wrong..
and the only thing 'merge killed was the paper he wrote his verse on!
^Meh - Nothing Special.

If every man hes been with turned straight i'd bet he'd yell out "please take my life"..
and i dont keep my punches family related because he covers that in his sex life! (meaning hes into incest)
^ It Had No Flow At All. It's Was...An Ok Line.


I often wonder where my wackness went that was built up inside
I deride.....
but with a sense of happiness...i found it deeply instilled in derive!
^ Ok.
You homo. . .sex punches are a no-no damn...I thought you knew
Fuck beating you black & blue...
....ama punch you in & out every single hue!
^Decent.
And this foo is isn't only a biter. ..he also chews and swallows too
Laughed when he said,...
....... "Even if i was Jill I wouldn't be jack shit next to you"
^ Alirght Wasn't Really Feelin It Though.
You personify ceramic....shit even with this filler i got you glazed
WOW. . .your home page was dope...till you named it purple haze
^ ahha - Made Me Chuckle.
You had no chance after all you still quote, edit, and explain bars
blah blah blah blah blah blah.....
^^^^considered quoteable when put next to your shit by far
^Meh - Played Concept.

All In All Emerge Took This Battle With Ease
Derive's Punches Were Horrible And Very Unafective
Emerge Came Decent Although I Saw A Few Played
Concepts He Still Had The Batter Verse By Far.

V/Emerge.

Polled.
-Axe

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

Shit.... god damn... just cuz u got beat no need to sway Derive

*Edit... sorry token when i wrote this post the swaying was there

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No it was not^^^^....this is bullshit, emerge, bring on all of your dickryders

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

Token, post count means shit, record means shit, and i have just realised, that text battling on RB is useless.....well, unless in a tournament....


uppin..............
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If u want a poll, make a new tread..ill close this, & edit votes in.

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Fuck you

No point on a poll, records dont show anyways, so fuck a poll.....


up.........