Wrote this up a lil quick. Holla at me.

The essence of life astounds me in all different ways.
But what is the true meaning of life?
What's it all about?
It is just to have fun and have no worries?
Is it to simply be nice to people until you go to heaven?
Or is life here, for us to live in a worlds of pain and sorrow,to suffer the hardships of broken friendship and love?
To give us pain, to threaten us for no reason at all?
What is the point of it all?

Life is like an empty book waiting for us to fill in the details.
But then someone comes along and burns your whole story, your life, your exact purpose for which we live in this chaotic place called earth.

When you're feeling your best, like nothing can go wrong, someone strikes down on you and takes away all you've worked hard for.
Someone comes into your brain and deletes all your happy thoughts...
Why is life like this?
What is the point of it all?

Life is like a candle light, just waiting to be blown out. They stock you night and day.They are there to make your life miserable amd the only person who truly loves them is god. You want to thrive them till they corrupt so they can't hurt you anymore, But you can't.
You can't stop these fiends whos whole purpose is to ruin your life.
Because this creature who is put on earth for one reason to make your life a living nightmare...IS YOUR OWN LIVING SELF.

^dog that was some nice shit. ya flow is nice, can definitely feel dat...its straight to da point. very detailed...overall its a great poem...

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4real dawggy thx

That was good man.............I really think you should join Superior Rebels......................we the best Poetic and Open Mic crew right now other then Soft Focus.

thats madd gud, its so true!!!! keep droppin...return tha favor

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^^ liked that

anyway about the poem, i often wonder about life itself, the meaning, why we are here, whats the point, ect, but i havent yet wrote a poem about my thoughts on life itself that actually got very far, for i become lost, with too many questions and stupid answers to continue. i like how you took your ideas and wrote them out, the structure made it seem like you were writting everything as it came to you, its all so natural feeling. you used good detail. vocab coudl be brought up thou. flow was basic. but it was the content of this piece that is striking. thou your thoughts on life differ some from mine, im able to understand where your coming from your thoughts you put in this. it was a nice read.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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dat poem was hott it was really good keep doin yo thang cause u can really write