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here's ma verse:

This guy's a "Coward" like "Howard" and hides behind the "Bush"
You rhyming is like a riding ur first "Bike" so you gonna need that "First push"
The only time you see "Pussy" is by looking at your "Reflection"
This guys rhymes are like a "Broken Compass" and has lost his sense of "Direction"
I've never been in a battle where I actually bend or budge
Cos Fresh be packin "Heat" while Heartless be packin "Fudge"
I'll sign you to ''Death row'' but i'll be "Suge Knight"
And leave your rhymes "Hung-over" as if they were "Vanilla Ice"
Now ya'll have witnessed a ''Fresh'' victory against this rookie upon~us
All thats left is to dig "Heartless" a grave in the "Land of Promise"


gud luck

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come on dawg u postin yet?

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lol.

Just my third post on RB and already I'm slittin' throats
Drainin' "fresh" emcees like crack addicts sippin "cokes"
Align your lines with signs and ya still couldn't find ya mind
Kinda like a race you can't win, ya starin at my fine behind
I could cut this list "short" and it'd still be "longer" than your ability
Inject the rest of ya text with supersenses, you still ain't feelin' me
Your quoting Tupac man cuz nothing about you is original
You're like a pastor preaching words without a religion yo
the say "its funny how time flies when you're having fun"
sorry son, time for you won't be flyin cuz after this you ain't havin NONE

out

i liked fresh betta just because he had a real nice flow to his junk.........saint......take more sensible punches and u would of had this........but anywayz...............

VOTE: Fresh

both came iight, fresh had the betta wordplay off his opponent name, nice flow from both, fresh punches hit a lil betta, saint was a lil weak on punches,
neither were creative, nothin to hot from them either but fresh edge..

vote fresh

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hemm the winner...... i dunno ... lol jus playing

this was good but fresh took this, he had better wordplay and punches
saint your verse was way to basic and could of used more harder punches
but saint i think you could of came harder as i see

but any way holla back on the reply votes

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fresh was more on point, simple but more on point. Saint i felt ya flow, but some of the punches needed work. fresh kept the flow and punches consistent and that's why he gets my vote-fresh

ok man.......fresh had this battle all the way...............good verse from both but....i feel that fresh ahd this..he was on point and was consistent on his flow and punches...a battle is won when u get the punches going

my vote is fresh...
hit my battles up...i spend time on urs....u do the same


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