this is how it goes..
basically you spit first.....
i'll go after..dont take too long..
u know the rul'z..
3-0=ko, or 1st to get 5 votes wins...
aight..lets go...
10/20 lines max.

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Yo, I'll shove a gun in ya grill, greasy and heated
Smothered in hot mustard so when I feed it to you it's easy to eat it
You need to be immediately treated
While you breathin' you'll be leavin'
The receiving room this evening with Jesus
You hate on us, we'll be waitin' on eight corners
Swarmin' ya hood with a thousand angry skateboarders
I'll hop in the Jeep, slam on the gas and charge you
And bombard you in the car that ya mom bought you
Mess around and get choked and found in a moat
Floatin' around drowned face down in a boat
I'll pile five dudes in a pen
And we'll pull up to the seven mile drive-thru
At McDonald's and pile-drive you
I got the power to snatch a driver out his Eddie Bauer
When it rides by me at ninety miler per hour
This place is my house, I might as well erase my face with white-out
Cause y'all can't see me like Mase's eyebrows
It's like that, it's like that

uh..yeah..now herez a puusy called jAmIe, even if i was a soccerball, bitch u still couldnt play me/i tell u to ure face , u suck like a baby, cut, down to the gut, ....i show u what pain-be/ i come through Chippenham, gun clapped about six-of-em/shir..half the bullshit u write, couldnt be rapped to a beat, i put ure ass on ure kneez...and spoon feed u defeat/ u couldnt follow in my steps, if u walked in my feet, i put ure face up my ass...and make u see shit/eat shit...motherfuckin hear shit/ u couldnt kill me if i was dead, dying or sick, u couldnt even 'CUM' close to winning to this if u jerkin off a big black DICK/the ATTACK IS BRUTAL, these FACTS AINT RUMORS, my words 'stay in mind' until you 'CONTRACT A TuMoR!/i be The ReaLeSt/Look Out! My FLOW BOMBS THE ILLEST, and STAMP STRONG ON BITCHES while this fagggot comes up short' giving 'HANDJOBS TO MIDGETS'/this bitch is a liar, plus an eminem biter/i'm gon' bomb on you/"Cause y'all cant see me like mase's eyebrow"....isnt that eminem on a sway & Tech volume/hey look everybody..jamie's a common thief,i dont give...a F*@%...bitch succumb to ure defeat....ha ha

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YoUrS TrUlLY... .CL

let the voting begin.....
uppin for votes.................
..............c'mon.....................

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YoUrS TrUlLY... .CL

this is how its broken down

opener-neither
structure-jamie
flow-cl
punches-cl
personals-cl
creativity-cl
closer-jamie

vote-cl

yo hit up this battle and i will vote in on your future battles...pc
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111543

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