Aiyo i posted this yesterday but forgot bout that one piece a day shit so i'm postin it again cuz i want sum feedback on it...show sum luv...

Sumtimes its cursed to be blessed, cuz you got a thirst to be best
Maybe cuz its tha worst I detest, I'll be tha first to request
A battle wit a veteran, cuz rookies feel like nursery tests
I eat away at edible minds, wit my incredible rhymes
Fuck rappers wit sexual rhymes, at these unforgettable times
I drop bombs on tha mic, I try to leave minimal wreckage
But when I spit a flow, its critical, I leave a subliminal message
It's all political, but biblical, prophetic speeches composed
Wit each of tha flows, the youngstas puzzled, I'm teachin tha pro's
Every subdivision of my brain I reach, and it grows
I don't mean to preach to tha souls, but I'm speakin to tha streets I suppose
Every feature enclosed, within my poetic scriptures
Will let chu inside of my head and form kinetic pictures
But front, and slugs will leave you deformed like genetic mixtures...

__________________
~Jerzey~
As I'm Blessed with
Tha best gift

~One~

Holla at cha boi

ill shit homie! nice vocabulary, and nice flow. Nice rhyme scheme also. overall: 7.5/10 keep it up dawg holla 1