Lazy antz

See the miconception is……..
we should all try to achieve perfection-
if you believe wrong but percieve right the general perception-
thinks your wise in their eyes and essential to progression.
There’s book smarts n street lessons……..
but what about knowledge of knowledge-
Oh that’s wisdom….. which comes with age so why go to college
I should just move out and the age of thirty one with nothing to do-
And then retire when welfares bled dry and collect pention by 32.
And I do….so Lifes’ not a bitch well actually it is-
That’s why it irritates you so many times and won’t just let you live.
The theories of” enjoy being alive” but “strive to survive” just clash-
So while you invest in happiness from cash-
I’ll invest on making your stock market crash.
I’ve walked .8 kilometers through your avenue-
Then walked another .8 true to the life I live cause I have to-
And in the end if you thought you were better than me just review-
Cause I just walked a mile as me in both of our shoes.
where im from life is just…. but still faces injustice for just us-
But where your from proving your rigth makes you feel righteous.
They tell me I should love being me-
But who are they….
the ones’ who turn a 4 letter word to a 3 letter abreviation cause they lazy?
and I say…..
That’s why it don’t work people are to scared to pull their weight-
Love hurts so why try when its safer to just hate?
And that’s fate- no that’s faith……so what do u believe?
Is your mother and father to blame or is the seed truly the enemy?
I 9 to 5 till im 95 with every inch and breath-
But in the end what have I earned except death.
Lazyness is a disease effecting everything and anything-
So I work like a slave today and so tomorrow i feast like a king.

Youve always had an interesting structure WORD but no matter because it always flowed smoothly......another dope drop man....A lot of truth an emotion in this piece.....dope shit........always a pleasure reading your work.........keep em comin!
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dope
really enjoyed this drop
loved the way you worded some of the lines in this..
great piece about your perception of life and cynicism


'There’s book smarts n street lessons……..
but what about knowledge of knowledge-
Oh that’s wisdom….. which comes with age so why go to college

'And I do….so Lifes’ not a bitch well actually it is-

'Cause I just walked a mile as me in both of our shoes.
^really ill..


muchos props
liking it
peep my anopheles drop if you could man

Pax

Thanks This A New Approach For Me

Well damn yiour knew apraoch is good..this has tobe one of the more relative conceots i've seen you do...and you pulled it off extreamly well...evry line gripped me...it had a great emotional and descrptive edge to it...very werll done...peep something in my sig...or my casket an tombstone if ye have time...

but again...great job

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you are good...I believe you can rap this rhyme it was not a poem or a contest to see who can use the biggest word that nobody has heard before lik ealot of other faggots here...you demonstrated a rhyme that we can all unsterstand..not just the book worms...thanks

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I liked the way you made people think. You used some very good leading questions. The work seemed to flow very logically. Nicely structured argument. I thought your closer should've been worded a little differently but very nice piece.

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Please Give Me An Example

wut can i say WP u did it again...mas dope as all ur otha drops...vocab, the new style was all fire as always..this drop really isnt different from ne othas, jus its style, it was dope as the rest...good read n flowed wit wuteva vocab u had...once again...strait dopeness...keep spittin to de fullest

Peace

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That was WORD PERFECT,,,,,,,well nearly, nice spit man!

"Please Give Me An Example"

seemed like the last line was a little stretched out - so I'm thinking something like:

Lazyness is a disease effecting every-thing and any-thing-

I might be slaving today - but tomorrow I'll feast as a king.
So I slave today and tomorrow feast like a king.
Slaving now - but tomorrow feast as a king.
So I slave now and later feast as a king.

But I mean ultimately you're the one saying it so I'm sure you can figure out what flows best for you. - Peace

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i li9ked that yo maybe you would like to jump on a remix wit me